记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise, avoid hesitation and repetition, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one specific detail. Use correct grammar (e.g., ‘I’m good at remembering things’) and limit to 2–4 sentences. Organize with a brief reason and an example.

範例: Yes, I’m good at remembering things because I practice repetition. For example, I repeat names and phone numbers aloud a few times and write short notes, which helps me recall them later.

建議: Use correct tense and a clear structure: topic sentence, linking word, supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary words. Say when and how you use notes and give a short example of an important thing you saved.

範例: No, I haven’t forgotten anything important because I always note important dates in my phone calendar. For instance, I put reminders for doctor appointments and bill due dates so my phone alerts me in advance.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating what you need to remember, then list 2–3 specific daily items using linking words (first, then, finally). Correct grammar (plural/singular, word order) and avoid long run-on sentences.

範例: I need to remember only a few routine things each day because my schedule is consistent. For example, I wake up at 7:00, go to work, come home for lunch, and attend evening classes, so I mainly remember timing and appointments.

建議: Give a clear method: topic sentence describing your main strategy, then one or two specific techniques with linking words. Fix grammar and avoid contradictions (e.g., saying you have a quiet memory but remember). Be concise and coherent.

範例: I remember important things by writing them down and setting phone reminders. If it’s a special occasion I also set multiple alerts and add notes so I won’t forget.

× I cannot, uh, not down to the memorizing the things I uh, I can even memorising those things who who are a little bit not so important that also I can memorising.

✓ I cannot not write down everything I am memorizing; I can even memorize things that are not very important.

Multiple errors: double negation and word order ('cannot not down to' is incorrect), incorrect gerund/participle forms ('memorizing' vs 'memorising' British spelling is OK but forms were misused), and misuse of relative pronoun ('who' should be 'that' for things). Suggestion: use simple clauses and correct verb forms: 'write down' for recording, 'am memorizing' or 'memorize' for present actions, and 'that' for things.

× No, I never forgotten something important because I have habit to note down the important things or important date in my mobile phone.

✓ No, I have never forgotten anything important because I have a habit of noting important things or dates in my mobile phone.

Error: incorrect past participle usage without auxiliary ('never forgotten' needs 'have never forgotten') and article/preposition errors ('have habit to' should be 'have a habit of', 'important date' should be plural or 'an important date'). Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences ('have never forgotten') and correct collocations: 'a habit of noting'.

× So I never forgotten something important that what more.

✓ So I have never forgotten anything important; what more, ...

Error: missing auxiliary for past participle again ('have never forgotten'). Also 'something' should be 'anything' after negatives, and 'that what more' is ungrammatical; use linking phrase 'what's more' or 'what more'. Suggestion: use 'have never forgotten anything' and 'what more' or 'what's more'.

× Basically that is not need to remember in my daily life because the daily routine are Sam so I can easily remember that all things the like OK wake up at 7:00 AM, then go to the job, then at home for lunch and then for the classes and then some home visits and at dinner back.

✓ Basically there is nothing I need to remember in my daily life because the daily routine is the same, so I can easily remember everything: wake up at 7:00 AM, go to work, have lunch at home, then attend classes, visit some homes, and return for dinner.

Errors: 'that is not need to remember' should be 'there is nothing I need to remember' (there be issue and quantifier). Subject-verb agreement: 'daily routine are Sam' should be 'routine is the same'. 'go to the job' -> 'go to work'; word order and article issues fixed. Suggestion: use 'there is nothing I need to remember' and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct collocations.

× The important things I usually remember because the I I have a quiet memory so I cannot remember all things but if also also I have not down the important things like date or any occasion so it's the advance remember.

✓ I usually remember important things because I have a good memory, so I can remember most things; but if I have not written down important things like dates or special occasions, I might forget them.

Multiple issues: pronoun/error 'the I I' and word choice 'quiet memory' should be 'good memory'. 'I cannot remember all things' contradicts previous clause; likely 'I can remember most things'. 'have not down' is wrong — use 'have not written down' or 'have not noted down'. 'it's the advance remember' is ungrammatical; use 'I might forget them' or 'I rely on notes in advance'. Suggestion: use clear subjects, correct collocations ('have a good memory', 'write down/noted down'), and modal 'might' for possibility.