记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (memorising vs memorizing consistency), and give one or two specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, however).

範例: Yes, I'm generally good at memorizing things. For example, I keep a short checklist for shopping and events, so I rarely forget items. However, in emergencies I might forget occasionally, but that doesn't happen often.

建議: Answer clearly with correct tense and complete sentences. State the forgotten item, describe consequence briefly, and explain what you did to resolve it. Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

範例: Yes. Last week I accidentally forgot my house keys at work, so I couldn't get into my home. I called a friend to help and then a locksmith opened the door, which was stressful but solved the problem.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons; remove fillers and correct grammar (contain -> contains). Use linking words (first, second, because) and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: I need to remember my house keys and my phone every day. First, the keys are essential to enter my home. Second, my phone and laptop contain important documents and I use my phone for navigation, so I always carry them.

建議: Provide a structured response: start with the method, explain how you use it with specific detail, and give a short result. Avoid repetition and filler words, and use correct verb forms (makes, write -> wrote/write).

範例: I usually use a note app on my phone to remember important things. For example, I create a checklist in the Notebook app for daily tasks and longer-term reminders, which makes me feel less overwhelmed and helps me stay organized.

× I think I'm very good at memorizing things as I mostly don't forget anything that whether it is an event or anythings like uh this is on my list.

✓ I think I'm very good at memorizing things because I mostly don't forget anything, whether it is an event or anything on my list.

The sentence uses inconsistent and awkward conjunctions and incorrect plural 'anythings'. 'As' can be used but 'because' is clearer here; 'whether it is an event or anything on my list' is the correct structure. Also remove filler words and fix 'anythings' to 'anything'. Ensure present simple is used for habitual actions.

× Like grocery or shopping.

✓ Like grocery shopping.

The noun phrase should be 'grocery shopping' (a compound noun) or 'groceries' if referring to items. Dropping the article and combining the words is idiomatic.

× I never forget things but sometimes in some emergency it may happen but not regularly.

✓ I never forget things, but sometimes in an emergency I might, although not regularly.

Maintain present simple for habitual action ('I never forget') and use modal 'might' for possible exceptions. Use singular 'an emergency' and improve word order and concision.

× Last week I have forgotten my my home case and my office and it was It has become very difficult for me to enter in my house.

✓ Last week I forgot my house keys and my office keys, and it became very difficult for me to enter my house.

Use simple past ('forgot', 'became') with a past time expression 'Last week'. 'Home case' is unclear; likely 'house keys' or 'key case'. Remove redundant words and correct preposition use ('enter my house' not 'enter in my house').

× So I just took the help of my friend and the key maker to open the door and it was A and the night was very.

✓ So I asked my friend and a locksmith to open the door, and the night was very difficult.

Replace 'took the help of' with 'asked' or 'got help from'. 'Key maker' is better as 'locksmith'. The phrase 'it was A' is unclear and removed; specify 'the night was very difficult' or appropriate adjective. Correct pronoun and article use.

× The first most important thing is the, uh, house keys, which is very essential and uh, the second thing will be my laptop and my phone, which I always carry uh, with me, uh, as it contain more documents and uh, I need to use the Google map on my phone and laptop has my document so.

✓ The most important thing is the house keys, which are essential. The second things are my laptop and my phone, which I always carry with me because they contain important documents; I use Google Maps on my phone, and my laptop has my documents.

Use 'the most important' rather than 'first most'. 'House keys' is plural so use 'are'. 'Second things' -> 'the second things are' or 'the second are'. Use 'contain' for plural subject 'they'. Use articles correctly ('the Google Maps' often just 'Google Maps'). Improve sentence structure and punctuation.

× I usually make notes of the things which I need to remember throughout the day or for a long period.

✓ I usually make notes of the things that I need to remember throughout the day or for a long period.

Use 'that' or 'which' correctly; in restrictive relative clauses, 'that' is preferred in informal speech. The sentence is grammatical but 'which' here is restrictive so changing to 'that' improves correctness.

× And this make like there is on my phone, there is an app known as notebook in which I just wrote the things which are very essential.

✓ I do this on my phone using an app called Notebook, in which I write the things that are essential.

Maintain present simple for habitual action ('I write'). Correct verb agreement ('this makes' or rephrase as 'I do this'). Use 'called' instead of 'known as', and 'write' rather than past 'wrote' for ongoing habit.

× And due to that, I don't feel very overwhelming.

✓ Because of that, I don't feel overwhelmed.

Use the adjective 'overwhelmed' to describe the speaker's state, not the adverb 'overwhelming'. 'Because of that' is a cleaner connector. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.