记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本能表达意思，但有逻辑与用词问题：1) 开头应直接回答并给出简洁原因；2) “little secret room”比喻不太自然，建议用更具体的表述；3) 句子冗长且有语法问题（时态和条件句）；4) 可使用连接词使表达更连贯；5) 控制在最多5句之内。

範例: Yes, I am generally good at memorising things because I focus better when I am genuinely interested. For example, if I read about a topic I like, I usually remember key facts easily. However, if the material is boring, I tend to forget it quickly.

建議: 回答能传达大意，但语法和表达不够准确：1) 使用正确时态（现在完成或过去式）更合适；2) 句子结构冗长且含糊，建议列举具体例子说明“重要的事情”；3) 使用连接词使原因与结果更清楚；4) 最多5句。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things, especially since I started working. For instance, I once missed an important meeting because I was juggling work and evening classes. This happened because my schedule was very busy and I hadn’t set a reminder.

建議: 回答内容具体但表达冗长且有重复：1) 开头应有主题句直接回答；2) 精简并使用具体细节（例如具体事项：meetings, deadlines, classes）；3) 使用连接词（such as, therefore）提高连贯性；4) 注意名词复数和冠词使用。

範例: I need to remember many daily commitments, such as work shifts, meeting times and deadlines for assignments. Because I have both a full-time and a part-time job, I often feel overwhelmed if I don’t record these details. Therefore I try to plan my week in advance.

建議: 回答明确且实用，但可以更精炼并加入具体例子和连接词：1) 开头直接说明方法；2) 给出具体工具或步骤（e.g., Google Calendar, alarms, to-do apps）；3) 可说明效果或例子以增加说服力；4) 控制句子数量不超5句。

範例: I mainly use technology to remember important things, such as Google Calendar and phone alarms. For example, I set calendar events with reminders an hour before meetings and use a to-do app for daily tasks. This helps me avoid missing appointments and reduces stress.

× Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I found it easier to keep in my little secret room.

✓ Yes, I'm good at memorizing things because I find it easier to keep them in my little secret room.

句子中原用過去式“found”與前半句現在時“I'm good”不一致，應使用現在時“find”。另外“it”指代不明，應用複數代詞“them”指代“things”。建議在表達普遍事實或習慣時保持動詞時態一致，並用正確代詞指代前文名詞。

× In my mind, however, it would only happen if I have interest in the world.

✓ In my mind, however, it only happens if I have an interest in the world.

原句使用“would... if I have”混合條件式與現在時顯得不自然。描述習慣性或一般情況應用一般現在時“only happens”。此外“have interest”前需不定冠詞“an”。建議使用一致的一般現在時並補充冠詞。

× If I lose the interest in the passage, I would not remember.

✓ If I lose interest in the passage, I will not remember.

“lose the interest”中“the”通常不與抽象的“interest”連用，應省略或用“an”。另外條件句若是可能會發生的情況，主句應用未來時“will not”而非“would not”。建議使用適當冠詞並保持條件句時態一致。

× Yes, I found it quite easier to forget something when I grow up because I have a very busy job and I have to remember all kinds of things in my daily life, including my study.

✓ Yes, I find it quite easy to forget things as I grow up because I have a very busy job and I have to remember all kinds of things in my daily life, including my studies.

句首“found”應為現在時“find”以與後面的現在情況一致；“quite easier”錯誤，應為“quite easy”或“easier than before”；“when I grow up”表達時間不當，應用“as I grow up”或“since I grew up”視情況；“something”較籠統，改為“things”；“study”作為學業應用複數“studies”。建議保持時態一致，調整形容詞用法和名詞形式。

× In my daily life I work a full time job and part time job which requires me to remember all my time schedules and arrangement because sometimes I fail to record on my phone so I feel overwhelmed to remember all the information in my mind.

✓ In my daily life I work a full-time job and a part-time job, which require me to remember all my schedules and arrangements because sometimes I fail to record them on my phone, so I feel overwhelmed trying to remember all the information in my head.

原句缺少冠詞（a full-time job, a part-time job），複數與動詞不一致，主語為兩個工作應用複數動詞“require”；“time schedules and arrangement”措辭重複且單複數混用，應為“schedules and arrangements”；“record on my phone”後需賓語“them”；“feel overwhelmed to remember”不自然，應用“feel overwhelmed trying to remember”或“feel overwhelmed by trying to remember”；“in my mind”改為更常用的“in my head”。建議拆分為更簡潔的句子，注意冠詞、主謂一致和搭配。

× I prefer to use technology to remember important things because I feel quite overwhelmed to remember all time schedules and arrangements in my mind.

✓ I prefer to use technology to remember important things because I feel quite overwhelmed trying to remember all the schedules and arrangements in my head.

“feel overwhelmed to remember”是錯誤結構，應使用“feel overwhelmed (by) doing”或“feel overwhelmed trying to…”。另外“all time schedules”應簡化為“all the schedules”；“in my mind”建議改為“in my head”。建議使用正確的動名詞結構來表達原因或感受。

× So I would choose to set reminders and calendar alerts to remind me the important things.

✓ So I choose to set reminders and calendar alerts to remind me of important things.

“would choose”暗示與語境不符，陳述習慣動作用一般現在時“choose”；“remind me the important things”缺少介詞“of”；“the important things”可簡化為“important things”。建議使用一致的時態並注意動詞與介詞搭配。