记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不自然且自相矛盾（先说“really good”又否定），句子结构混乱，词汇和语法错误较多。建议： 1) 开头直接回答问题，避免自相矛盾； 2) 用一到两句具体例子支持观点，使用连接词（for example, however）使逻辑清晰； 3) 注意词汇搭配（memory things→memory-related tasks; reciting Chinese passages→reciting Chinese texts）和语法（主谓一致、复数形式）。 练习方法：写一到两句的标准答案并反复朗读，录音检查矛盾与语法错误。

範例: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I find it difficult to memorise long Chinese texts, and I often forget small items at home. Because I prefer understanding concepts to rote learning, I usually rely on notes instead.

建議: 回答含糊且有许多停顿和语言错误（‘complex money’不明，时态错误‘forget’应为‘forgot’）。建议： 1) 用清晰的句子说明遗忘的具体物品或事件； 2) 使用正确时态叙述过去发生的事并给出简短原因或结果； 3) 减少填充词（uh）并用连接词（for example, also）连接信息。

範例: Yes, I have. For example, I often forget to take my mobile phone when I leave the house, which can be very inconvenient. I also once forgot my own birthday last year because I was so busy with exams.

建議: 回答不够直接且存在表达和词汇问题（microtonics? 应为 microelectronics或microsystems；句子冗长且结尾不完整）。建议： 1) 开门见山回答要记住的具体内容； 2) 用一两条具体细节说明这些记忆的重要性和用途； 3) 校正专业词汇并完成句子，使用连接词（because, so）保持连贯。

範例: In my daily life I need to remember important academic information. Because I major in microelectronics, I often memorise key formulas and circuit principles, which help me solve difficult problems in lab and exams.

建議: 回答较清晰且有具体方法，但语法需改进（take a paper→take a piece of paper or carry a notebook; writing→write; ensuring→to ensure; 不要重复不必要短语）。建议： 1) 使用更地道的表达描述记忆方法并给出例子； 2) 保持句子简洁，最多两到三句； 3) 可以补充其他策略（提醒、手机备忘）显示多样方法。

範例: I usually write important things down in a small notebook or set reminders on my phone. For example, before I leave home I check my checklist to make sure I have my keys and phone, and I set calendar alerts for deadlines.

× To be honest, I'm really good. I'm not really good at memory things.

✓ To be honest, I'm really good at some things, but I'm not good at memorising things.

原句中“memory things”用法不自然，應使用動名詞“memorising things”表示記憶相關的活動。同時句子前後意思矛盾，應用連接詞清晰表達對比，例如“but”。建議把句子合併為“I'm really good at some things, but I'm not good at memorising things.”以更自然地表達對比。

× For me, reciting Chinese passages are really a nightmare to me and additionally I usually forget things at home.

✓ For me, reciting Chinese passages is really a nightmare, and I usually forget things at home.

“reciting Chinese passages”為單一動名詞片語，作主語時動詞應使用單數形式“is”。另外“to me”重複，去掉一個更簡潔。建議注意主語是單數還是複數以決定動詞形式。

× Yes, to me, phone is a necessity that I need to, uh, bring to complex money, complete many works, but I usually forget to take it.

✓ Yes, for me, my phone is a necessity that I need to bring everywhere to manage money and complete many tasks, but I often forget to take it.

原句中時態與動詞搭配混亂，且“complex money”與“complete many works”用詞不當。將句子改為一般現在時描述習慣性的事（is / need / often forget）。將“complex money”改為“manage money”，“complete many works”改為“complete many tasks”更合適。建議使用恰當詞彙並保持時態一致。

× And additionally, uh, last year I really forget my, uh, birthday.

✓ And additionally, last year I really forgot my birthday.

此處描述發生在過去的事件，動詞應使用過去式“forgot”而不是現在式“forget”。建議在講過去事件時使用過去式。

× I don't need to remember many things like, uh, I major in microtonics, so many academic knowledge is very essential for me, so I need to remember some formulas that uh, really help me to solve difficult problem and.

✓ I don't need to remember many things. I major in microelectronics, so a lot of academic knowledge is essential for me, and I need to remember some formulas that really help me solve difficult problems.

原句中“microtonics”拼寫錯誤，應為“microelectronics”。“many academic knowledge”用法錯誤，knowledge不可數，應用“a lot of”或“much”。“solve difficult problem”需要複數“problems”。句子結構冗長且結尾不完整，應分成幾個句子並修正可數/不可數名詞和複數形式。

× As I mentioned above, I don't have a very good memory, so I usually take a paper with me, writing down the important things and ensuring that I will not forget that.

✓ As I mentioned above, I don't have a very good memory, so I usually take a piece of paper with me, write down important things, and make sure I won't forget them.

原句混用了動名詞短語和簡單現在時，應在列舉習慣性動作時使用並列的動詞形式（take, write, make sure）。“take a paper”不太自然，應為“take a piece of paper”。“ensuring that I will not forget that”冗長且指代不清，改為“make sure I won't forget them”。建議保持並列動詞的一致形式和清晰的代詞指代。