记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答应更自然并直接回应问题，语法和句子结构需要改进；避免重复并使用连接词使句子更流畅。建议用一到两句清晰表达，然后补充具体细节。比如：先说“Not really”或“No, I'm not good at remembering things.” 再说明常用的方法并用连词连接原因与例子。

範例: Not really — I'm not good at remembering things. So when something is important, I usually write it down in a notebook and ask someone to remind me, which helps me avoid forgetting.

建議: 回答内容合适但有语法和重复问题，时态与表达需更自然。避免重复短语（如“I decided I decided”），并用连接词解释后续改变。建议一到两句说明事件，一句说明改变措施并表达感受。

範例: Yes, I once forgot my mum's birthday when I was a child and felt really upset. After that, I started writing important dates in a notebook and setting phone reminders so it wouldn't happen again.

建議: 回答不够清晰且有重复语气词，句子混乱。应先给主题句，然后用具体细节列举要记的事项，并用连接词使其连贯。避免填充词（umm）和重复。

範例: I usually need to remember my class timetable and my daily plans. For example, I note what tasks I must finish each day, such as assignments and study sessions, so I can stay organised.

建議: 重复之前信息且语法和词序有问题。回答应简洁并展示多样化表达，使用连接词说明不同方法的优点。建议一句总述方法，随后用短句说明每种方法的优点。

範例: Since I'm not good at remembering, I write important items in a notebook and set phone reminders. I also ask my best friend to remind me when something is urgent, which adds an extra layer of backup.

× No, I'm not good at memory, so when every time something's important, I would prefer write down on my notebook and tell somebody to notice me.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things, so whenever something is important, I prefer to write it down in my notebook and ask someone to remind me.

错误涉及定冠词和搭配以及词类使用：英文中通常说 "good at remembering" 而不是 "good at memory"；“when every time something's important” 不符合习惯用法，应改为 "whenever something is important"；动词不定式缺主语/形式，应为 "prefer to write" 而非 "prefer write"；记笔记用介词是 "in my notebook" 而不是 "on"；"tell somebody to notice me" 不自然，应改为 "ask someone to remind me"。建议记住常见固定搭配（good at + -ing; write down in a notebook; ask/ask someone to remind me; whenever = 每当）。

× Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday when I was a child. I feel very upset, so afterwards I decided to I decided to write down important things on my notebook and set phone reminders so I wouldn't forget again.

✓ Yes, I once forgot my mom's birthday when I was a child. I felt very upset, so afterwards I decided to write down important things in my notebook and set phone reminders so I wouldn't forget again.

错误为时态不一致：叙述过去发生的事情，应在过去时保持一致，句中应使用 "felt" 和 "decided" 而不是当前时或重复。介词应为 "in my notebook"。建议保持叙述事件时使用同一过去时态，并注意不要重复词语（如重复出现 "I decided"）。

× Well, I need to remember my curriculum schedule and also umm need to remember the plan. What did what did I do in this day and daily homework.

✓ Well, I need to remember my class schedule and also the plans: what I did that day and my daily homework.

原句句子结构混乱且用词不准确："curriculum schedule" 不常用，更自然是 "class schedule" 或 "timetable"；重复 "need to remember" 可合并；"What did what did I do in this day" 是错误的疑问式结构，应改为陈述性的 "what I did that day"。建议理顺句子结构，避免口语重复并使用更自然的短语（class schedule, what I did that day, daily homework）。

× Well, because I'm not good at memory, so when every time comes the important things I prefer to write down on my notebook and to set a remind notice on my phone. Also, sometimes I told my best friend to let her remind me.

✓ Well, because I'm not good at remembering things, whenever important things come up I prefer to write them down in my notebook and set reminder notifications on my phone. Also, sometimes I ask my best friend to remind me.

包含多处错误：同样应使用 "good at remembering" 而非 "good at memory"；"when every time comes the important things" 语序和搭配错误，应为 "whenever important things come up"；"write down on my notebook" 应为 "write them down in my notebook"；"set a remind notice" 不自然，应为 "set reminder notifications" 或 "set a reminder"；最后一句时态与表达不当，过去式 "told" 改为现在/常态性 "ask" 或 "ask my best friend to remind me"。建议学习固定搭配与常用表达（whenever ... come up; write ... down in a notebook; set a reminder; ask someone to remind me），并注意时态与主谓一致。