记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接但有语法和表达问题。应避免重复并改进语法时态与句子衔接，使用一到两句主题句并加一两句具体例子或原因。可用连接词如 'for example' 或 'usually' 增强自然度。

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often can't recall what I had for breakfast because I eat similar meals every day and don't pay much attention to them.

建議: 内容有具体事例，信息完整，但表达中有不自然的片段和细节可精简。注意时态一致和更自然的连接词如 'because'、'however'、'fortunately'，并去掉冗余。

範例: Yes. In my first year of college I missed an important programming assignment because I misunderstood the deadline, so I got zero for it. Fortunately, I did well on the final exam and still passed the course.

建議: 回答含有重复和语音填充词（uh），表达不流畅。应先给主题句，再用具体细节说明如何记住或安排饮食，控制句子长度并用连接词例如 'for example' 或 'so'。

範例: In my daily life I need to remember to plan my meals in advance. For example, I usually decide what to eat the night before and place an order about three hours ahead so I don't rush at mealtime.

建議: 回答说明了工具但表达含糊（'5th' 不清楚）和填充词。应更简洁并给出具体操作步骤與例子，如设置提醒时间或优先级，使用连接词使逻辑清晰。

範例: I use a reminder app on my phone to remember important tasks. I write down each task, set a deadline and an alert, and sometimes add priority labels so I see the most urgent items first.

× No, I don't think I'm good at memorizing things. Because if you ask me what did you eat at for dinner or for breakfast, then probably I don't remember what I ate.

✓ No, I don't think I'm good at memorizing things. Because if you ask me what I ate for dinner or for breakfast, I probably won't remember.

句中使用的间接疑问句和时态不匹配。“what did you eat”是直接疑问句形式，嵌入到宾语从句时应改为陈述式过去时“what I ate”。此外句子末尾用现在时“probably I don't remember what I ate”显得不自然，改为“I probably won't remember”更符合说话时对将来或假设情况的表达。建议：在间接疑问句中把主谓语排序改为陈述式，并注意时态一致性和更地道的副词位置（probably 放在助动词后）。

× Yes, in my first year of college I forgot to submit an important programming language assignment because I misunderstood the deadline and I remember I got 00 points for that assignment. But fortunately I got a good grade for final exam and that.

✓ Yes, in my first year of college I forgot to submit an important programming assignment because I misunderstood the deadline, and I remember I got 0 points for that assignment. But fortunately I got a good grade for the final exam.

句子包含过去时叙述，需保持时态和表达准确。“programming language assignment”表意笨拙，改为“programming assignment”。“00 points”应为“0 points”。“for final exam and that”结构不完整且含糊，应为“for the final exam”。建议：保持过去时叙述一致，使用明确名词短语，使用定冠词“the”在特定的考试前。

× I think the important thing to remember in my daily life is that I need to remember, I need to, uh, order the meal, order each meal on time, like, uh, three hours earlier. I need to decide what I need to eat for the meal.

✓ I think the important thing to remember in my daily life is that I need to order my meals on time, for example about three hours in advance. I need to decide what to eat for each meal.

原句中时态总体为一般现在时，用来描述日常习惯。原句重复“need to remember, I need to”冗长且不自然，改为更简洁的表达。“order each meal on time, like three hours earlier”应改为“order my meals on time, for example about three hours in advance”以更自然地表达提前订餐的意思。“decide what I need to eat for the meal”中不必要重复“need”，改为“decide what to eat for each meal”。建议：简化重复的词，使用习惯性现在时和更自然的副词短语（in advance）。

× There is a little app at my phone and this is an app that can help me to, uh, write down the plan of what I need to do. I write the plan and it will remind me 5th.

✓ There is a small app on my phone that helps me write down the plans of what I need to do. I write the plans and it will remind me.

“at my phone”是介词用法错误，表示位置应使用“on my phone”。“a little app”在此语境用“small”或直接“an app”更自然。“help me to write down the plan of what I need to do”中“to”可以省略，且“plan”应为复数或更自然的“plans”。最后“it will remind me 5th”不完整且不明晰，应删去“5th”或根据具体意思改为具体时间点。建议：使用正确介词“on”，保持名词单复数一致，并删除或明确不完整的时间信息。