巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확한 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 명확하고 간결하게 구성하고, 감정을 표현할 때 더 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이세요.

範例: Yes, I like eating chocolate because it tastes sweet and makes me feel relaxed and happy.

建議: 답변이 중복되고 불필요한 말이 많습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 구체적인 빈도와 상황을 명확하게 설명하세요.

範例: I usually eat chocolate about three times a week because my students' parents often give me chocolates or cookies as gifts.

建議: 과거와 현재를 비교할 때 시제를 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 또한, 부모님의 조언을 더 명확하게 표현하세요.

範例: Yes, I did. I used to eat more chocolate when I was a kid than I do now. My parents always told me to brush my teeth after eating sweets.

建議: 답변이 반복적이고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 이유를 명확하고 논리적으로 설명하며, 불필요한 문장은 제거하세요.

範例: Chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet and delicious, and most people enjoy eating tasty treats.

建議: 문장이 어색하고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 좋아하는 맛과 싫어하는 이유를 간결하고 정확하게 표현하세요.

範例: My favorite flavor is white chocolate because I don't like dark chocolate; it tastes too bitter for me. Also, I don't like chocolate with fruit.

建議: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요.

範例: I think chocolate can be a good gift, but not for everyone because some of my friends don't like eating chocolate.

× I'm chocolate is really.

✓ Chocolate is really sweet.

The original sentence 'I'm chocolate is really.' is incomplete and incorrectly structured. It seems the student intended to say 'Chocolate is really sweet.' To improve, ensure sentences have a clear subject and predicate and avoid mixing pronouns and nouns incorrectly.

× Kinda.

✓ It's kind of sweet.

'Kinda' is an informal contraction of 'kind of' and should be used as part of a phrase, not alone. The sentence should be 'It's kind of sweet.' to properly describe the chocolate.

× it made me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ it makes me feel relaxed and happy.

The student is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'makes' is appropriate instead of past tense 'made'. Using present tense indicates a general truth or repeated action.

× I think I eat chocolate. Umm 3 * a week.

✓ I think I eat chocolate about three times a week.

The phrase '3 * a week' is unclear and incorrect. The correct quantifier is 'three times a week' to express frequency.

× then their parents give me some chocolate or cookie something.

✓ then their parents give me some chocolate or cookies or something.

The phrase 'cookie something' is incorrect. It should be 'cookies or something' to indicate an unspecified item similar to cookies.

× When I was young I eat chocolate more than now.

✓ When I was young, I ate chocolate more than now.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was young'), so the verb should be in past tense 'ate' instead of present tense 'eat'.

× So my parents say me, brush your teeth always.

✓ So my parents tell me, 'Brush your teeth always.'

The verb 'say' requires 'to' before the indirect object or should be replaced with 'tell' which directly takes an object. Also, direct speech should be quoted for clarity.

× Because chocolate is really sweet and delicious for everyone.

✓ Because chocolate is really sweet and delicious to everyone.

The adjective 'delicious' is typically followed by 'to' when indicating who finds it delicious, not 'for'.

× The why is the reason.

✓ That is the reason why.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. The corrected sentence 'That is the reason why.' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× because it really bite me. Beats me, beats for me

✓ because it really bites me. It beats me, beats for me.

The verb 'bite' needs to be in third person singular form 'bites' to agree with 'it'. The phrases 'Beats me, beats for me' are unclear and may be idiomatic or incorrect; clarification is needed.

× some my friends don't like chocolate to eat, so they don't like take chocolate.

✓ some of my friends don't like to eat chocolate, so they don't like to take chocolate.

The phrase 'some my friends' should be 'some of my friends'. Also, 'like chocolate to eat' should be 'like to eat chocolate'. The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to' + verb for infinitive form.