巧克力— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise.

範例: Yes, I like eating chocolate, but recently I have limited my intake because I am trying to stay fit.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Be direct and use proper sentence structure. Avoid vague phrases like 'I really eat them'.

範例: I usually eat chocolate once or twice a year.

建議: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by combining short sentences and correcting grammar. Use linking words to make it more coherent.

範例: Yes, I often ate chocolate when I was a kid because I frequently received it as a gift.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Avoid double negatives and use correct adjectives. Also, try to provide a more structured and detailed explanation.

範例: I think chocolate is popular worldwide because it tastes sweet, smells wonderful, and has a smooth texture that many people enjoy.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding more detail and linking ideas smoothly.

範例: My favourite flavour is milk chocolate because it is not bitter and has a pleasant aroma.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and clarify your ideas with better linking words.

範例: Yes, I think chocolate is a great gift because it is easy to buy and available worldwide, such as in airports.

× Yes I do, but nowadays umm situations don't allowed me to eat too much too many chocolates because I'm keeping fit now.

✓ Yes I do, but nowadays umm situations don't allow me to eat too much or too many chocolates because I'm keeping fit now.

The modal verb 'don't' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'allow', not the past tense 'allowed'. Also, 'too much too many' is incorrect; it should be 'too much or too many' to distinguish between uncountable and countable nouns.

× Yes I do, but nowadays umm situations don't allowed me to eat too much too many chocolates because I'm keeping fit now.

✓ Yes I do, but nowadays umm situations don't allow me to eat too much or too many chocolates because I'm keeping fit now.

The phrase 'too much too many chocolates' is incorrect because 'too much' is used with uncountable nouns and 'too many' with countable nouns. Since 'chocolates' is countable, 'too many chocolates' is correct, or 'too much chocolate' if referring to the substance in general.

× Actually, I really eat them and maybe one or twice a year I think.

✓ Actually, I really eat it maybe once or twice a year, I think.

The pronoun 'them' refers to plural, but 'chocolate' is usually uncountable, so 'it' is appropriate. Also, 'one or twice' is incorrect; it should be 'once or twice'.

× Well, I did. When I was young. I often got chocolates as my gifts, so I have so much opportunity to eat them.

✓ Well, I did when I was young. I often got chocolates as my gifts, so I had many opportunities to eat them.

The sentence 'When I was young.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence. Also, 'have so much opportunity' should be in past tense 'had many opportunities' to match the past context.

× Well, I think no one don't like chocolates.

✓ Well, I think no one dislikes chocolates.

The phrase 'no one don't like' is a double negative and incorrect. 'No one' is singular and should be followed by 'dislikes' (third person singular).

× The chocolates is so amazing taste, it's sweet and smells great and smoothie in your mouth.

✓ Chocolate has an amazing taste; it's sweet, smells great, and smooth in your mouth.

'The chocolates is' is incorrect; 'chocolate' as an uncountable noun should be singular. Also, 'smoothie' is a noun; the correct adjective is 'smooth'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I think everybody.

✓ I think everybody likes it.

The sentence 'I think everybody.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Adding 'likes it' completes the thought.

× It's not that bitter and smells great.

✓ It's not that bitter and it smells great.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' before 'smells' to maintain parallel structure and clarity.

× Yes, I do. Chocolate is definitely a great gifts and it's it's easy to buy like our airports are around the world.

✓ Yes, I do. Chocolate is definitely a great gift and it's easy to buy since airports are all around the world.

'A great gifts' is incorrect because 'gifts' is plural but preceded by 'a'. It should be 'a great gift'. Also, the phrase 'like our airports are around the world' is unclear and corrected for clarity.