唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I like singing because it's my dream. I always practice singing all day so I can sing well to make people happy.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Yes, I learned how to sing so I can be the best singer and the whole city when I was a little girl.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
My sister because my sister want me to sing all day so that's why I practice all day to sing.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, because singing, singing is my dream and I always happy. I always listen to people singing all day in my life.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: សូមព្យាយាមឆ្លើយតបដោយប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិតជាក់លាក់។ កុំប្រើពាក្យមិនចាំបាច់ជាច្រើន ហើយព្យាយាមប្រើពាក្យភាសាអង់គ្លេសធម្មតា។
範例: Yes, I like singing because it is my passion. I practice every day to improve my skills and to bring joy to others through my voice.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 60.0建議: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិតដែលច្បាស់លាស់។ កុំប្រើពាក្យមិនត្រឹមត្រូវ និងព្យាយាមបង្ហាញពីពេលវេលា និងគោលបំណង។
範例: Yes, I have taken singing lessons since I was a little girl because I wanted to become the best singer in my city.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 65.0建議: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលច្បាស់លាស់ និងបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិត។ កុំធ្វើឲ្យមានការស្ទាក់ស្ទើរនៅក្នុងការឆ្លើយតប។
範例: I want to sing for my sister because she enjoys my singing and encourages me to practice every day.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 60.0建議: សូមប្រើរចនាសម្ព័ន្ធប្រយោគដែលត្រឹមត្រូវ និងបន្ថែមពត៌មានលម្អិតដែលពាក់ព័ន្ធ។ កុំធ្វើឲ្យមានការស្ទាក់ស្ទើរនៅក្នុងការឆ្លើយតប។
範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it is my dream and it makes me feel joyful. I also enjoy listening to others sing throughout my life.
文法
× Yes, I learned how to sing so I can be the best singer and the whole city when I was a little girl.
✓ Yes, I learned how to sing so I could be the best singer in the whole city when I was a little girl.
The sentence mixes past tense 'learned' with present tense modal 'can'. To maintain past tense consistency, 'can' should be changed to 'could'. Also, 'and the whole city' is incomplete and should be 'in the whole city' to make sense.
× My sister because my sister want me to sing all day so that's why I practice all day to sing.
✓ My sister because my sister wants me to sing all day, so that's why I practice all day to sing.
The verb 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my sister'. Also, a comma is added before 'so' to improve sentence clarity.
× Yes, because singing, singing is my dream and I always happy.
✓ Yes, because singing is my dream and I am always happy.
The phrase 'I always happy' is incorrect because 'happy' is an adjective and needs a linking verb 'am' to form the correct predicate 'I am always happy'. Also, the repeated 'singing' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.
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