唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Try to avoid repetition and use correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'more' multiple times, say 'It makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.'

範例: Yes, I like singing because I have many favorite songs. Whenever I am free or feeling bored, I usually sing. It makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains some hesitations and repeated words. Try to speak more fluently and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I have never learned to sing properly because I think my voice is not very suitable. Although I have tried singing a few times when music is playing, I am not confident about my skills.

建議: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly with correct grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your reasons.

範例: I want to sing for my parents because they always support me. Even though I don't sing very well, their compliments motivate me a lot.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more clearly and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples.

範例: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people. Whenever I feel low or demotivated, I sing songs in English, Hindi, and Nepali. Singing helps me feel better and more positive.

× There are lots of song in my in my favorite list whenever I am free and whenever I am so boring I used to sing a song.

✓ There are lots of songs in my favorite list. Whenever I am free and whenever I am bored, I use to sing a song.

The word 'song' should be plural 'songs' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'boring' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'bored' to describe the person's feeling. Additionally, 'used to' is the correct form for habitual actions in the past or present context.

× It feels like me more more more relaxed and comfortable when I am singing.

✓ It makes me feel more and more relaxed and comfortable when I am singing.

The phrase 'feels like me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'makes me feel' to indicate causing a feeling. Also, 'more more more' should be 'more and more' for proper emphasis.

× I have tried a few times when music is playing, I feel like I I sing well, but actually I don't know, I am not very good at it.

✓ I have tried a few times. When music is playing, I feel like I sing well, but actually, I don't know; I am not very good at it.

The sentence was run-on and needed separation for clarity. The past perfect 'have tried' is correct. Minor punctuation corrections improve readability.

× because parents is not those in me, I know I even though I don't sing a song very well but my parents give me a full compliment which makes me more more more motivation and it feels.

✓ because my parents are not close to me, I know even though I don't sing a song very well, my parents give me full compliments which motivate me a lot.

'Parents' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'Compliment' should be plural 'compliments' to match 'my parents'. The phrase 'more more more motivation' is awkward; 'motivate me a lot' is clearer.

× Is I think singing can bring lots of happiness to people because whenever I feel so low and I feel so demotivated, I. I used to 1. I used to sing one song in English and Hindi and Nepali and I feel like I I am so good that that's the time after.

✓ I think singing can bring lots of happiness to people because whenever I feel low and demotivated, I sing songs in English, Hindi, and Nepali, and I feel good afterwards.

The sentence had unnecessary 'Is' at the start and repeated 'I'. 'Used to' is for past habits; here, present tense 'I sing' fits better. The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity.