唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ja apnar kotha ke natural na kore. Apni 'feeling straight' er bodole 'feeling stressed' bolte paren. 'It's fun way to connected' er bodole 'It's a fun way to connect' bola uchit. Erokom chhoto chhoto grammar correction apnar answer ke onek natural ebong effective korbe.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I am feeling stressed, singing my favorite song lifts my mood instantly. Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu spelling ebong grammar error ache, ja apnar kotha ke clear korte badha day. 'chair' er bodole 'choir' bola uchit. 'local training' er bodole 'vocal training' better hobe. 'And I as always' er bodole 'And as always' bola uchit. Erokom chhoto chhoto correction apnar answer ke onek bhalo korbe.

範例: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in school. I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing lessons helped me improve my confidence and enjoy music more deeply. And as always, I love singing.

建議: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ebong word choice error ache. 'feel special' er bodole 'feels special' bola uchit. 'love once' er bodole 'loved ones' bola uchit. 'enjoyful' er bodole 'enjoyable' better hobe. 'stretch our bond' er bodole 'strengthen our bond' bola uchit. Erokom correction apnar answer ke onek natural ebong fluent korbe.

範例: I would like to sing for my friends and family. Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my effort, which motivates me to perform better. Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and enjoyable atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

建議: Apnar answer e onek grammar ebong word choice error ache, ja kotha ke bujhte oshubidha kore. 'me also singing always individual' er bodole 'singing is always an individual way' bola uchit. 'afflicting' er bodole 'affecting' or 'touching' better hobe. 'Group of chair' er bodole 'group choir' bola uchit. Apni sentence gulo ke sohoje ebong clear vabe bolte chesta korun.

範例: Yes, of course, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing is always an individual way to express emotions and can be very touching, especially when done with others. For example, in a group choir, many people feel relaxed and enjoy singing their favorite songs.

× For example, when I feeling straight, singing my favorite song lift my mood instantly.

✓ For example, when I am feeling stressed, singing my favorite song lifts my mood instantly.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present continuous tense 'am feeling'. Also, 'straight' is incorrect; the intended word is 'stressed'. Additionally, 'lift' should be 'lifts' to agree with the singular subject 'singing my favorite song'.

× Additionally, it's fun way to connected with others during social gathering.

✓ Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

The sentence misses the article 'a' before 'fun way'. The verb 'connected' should be in base form 'connect' after 'to'. Also, 'social gathering' should be plural 'social gatherings' to generalize the context.

× I took part in a chair where I received basic local training and learned about pitch and rhythm.

✓ I took part in a choir where I received basic local training and learned about pitch and rhythm.

The word 'chair' is incorrect; the correct word is 'choir' which means a group of singers. This is a vocabulary error rather than a preposition error, but it affects sentence meaning.

× And I as always, I love singing.

✓ And as always, I love singing.

The phrase 'I as always' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'as always' without the extra 'I'. This corrects the pronoun misuse and improves sentence flow.

× Singing for them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my effort, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my effort, which motivates me to perform better.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing for them'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to present tense.

× Additionally, sharing music with love once get a warm and enjoyful atmosphere that stretch our bond.

✓ Additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a warm and enjoyable atmosphere that strengthens our bond.

'Love once' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'loved ones'. 'Get' should be 'creates' to fit the subject. 'Enjoyful' is not a correct word; 'enjoyable' is correct. 'Stretch' should be 'strengthens' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes of course, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people and me also singing always individual to express their emotions and can be very afflicting especially when done with others.

✓ Yes, of course, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people, and singing also allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'me also singing always individual' is incorrect; it should be 'singing also allows individuals'. 'Afflicting' is incorrect; the intended word is 'uplifting'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× in Group of chair example, many people full enjoy and relaxed when they sing their favorite song.

✓ In group choir examples, many people fully enjoy and feel relaxed when they sing their favorite songs.

'Group of chair' is incorrect; it should be 'group choir'. 'Full enjoy' should be 'fully enjoy'. 'Relaxed' needs 'feel' before it to be grammatically correct. 'Favorite song' should be plural 'favorite songs' to generalize.