唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh sử dụng những từ không liên quan hoặc phát âm sai (ví dụ: "high noses" thay vì "high notes"). Hãy cố gắng sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý.

範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. However, I find it difficult to sing high notes, so I don't sing very often.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng về việc bạn đã học hát hay chưa, và giải thích ngắn gọn nếu có hoặc không.

範例: No, I have never taken formal singing lessons because I think it requires a lot of time and practice, which I haven't been able to commit to.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Tránh sử dụng những cụm từ không chính xác như "make my hair down" (nên là "let my hair down"). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: I like to sing for my family because they always support me during family gatherings. When I sing in front of them, I feel very comfortable and relaxed, and they encourage me to continue improving.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ hơn về lý do tại sao hát mang lại hạnh phúc.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it helps us express our feelings and reduces stress. For me, singing is a great way to relax and feel joyful.

× Uh, Venus, Venice. Viking music is my favorite subject at school, but I have no luck for singing because it's really hard for me to sing some high noses.

✓ Uh, Venus, Venice. Viking music is my favorite subject at school, but I have no luck with singing because it's really hard for me to sing some high notes.

The word 'noses' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'notes' when referring to musical tones. Also, the preposition 'for' should be 'with' after 'luck'. This is a vocabulary and preposition usage error.

× Have you ever learnt how to sing?

✓ Have you ever learned how to sing?

In American English, the past participle of 'learn' is 'learned'. 'Learnt' is more common in British English. Depending on the variety of English, 'learned' is preferred here for clarity.

× Uh, I find it time consuming to attain some classic like that. Uh, because I as IA mentioned, I have no notes for singing.

✓ Uh, I find it time-consuming to attain some classics like that. Uh, because as I mentioned, I have no notes for singing.

The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Classic' should be plural 'classics' to match the context. 'I as IA mentioned' is incorrect; it should be 'as I mentioned'. These are errors in adjective formation, pluralization, and word order.

× To sing for my family because they have always supported for me singing for family gatherings.

✓ To sing for my family because they have always supported me singing at family gatherings.

The verb 'support' does not require the preposition 'for' after it. Also, 'for family gatherings' should be 'at family gatherings' to indicate the event location. These are preposition usage errors.

× It listens, uh, I feel very comfortable and make my hair down, uh, when I sing in front of them, umm, they are encourage me to pursue.

✓ It listens, uh, I feel very comfortable and let my hair down, uh, when I sing in front of them, umm, they encourage me to pursue it.

The phrase 'make my hair down' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'let my hair down'. 'They are encourage me' should be 'they encourage me' to match subject-verb agreement and correct verb form. Also, 'pursue' needs an object, so 'it' is added. These are errors in idiomatic expression, verb form, and pronoun usage.

× Of course singing can bring happiness for people because it already may hit us. Great way for me to relax.

✓ Of course, singing can bring happiness to people because it may already affect us. It's a great way for me to relax.

The preposition 'for' after 'happiness' should be 'to'. The phrase 'it already may hit us' is awkward; 'may already affect us' is clearer. Also, the last sentence is a fragment and needs a subject 'It is'. These are errors in preposition use and sentence structure.