唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Yes, I like singing because if I have to feel the any negative thought in my mind and feel more depressed that time I will to listen the song. They are the motivate and encourage to me and my mindset are show the positive after listen thus.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
No, I am not to the learn about singing because I am singing for only own entertainment in the free time. I am not to sing as a professional.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
In future I believe that if I have to marriage that time I will do sing the song to my soul for my soul mate because it's a special occasion for me and her. So that time I will do want to sing the any romance.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Definitely singing can bring the happiness to the face on people 'cause today time every person have to face the large amount of stress on her body and mind. So singing is a better platform if any person can sing and listen the song in daily routine so they can to get the better.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 50.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ-ਰਚਨਾ ਵਿੱਚ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ, ਜੋ ਕਿ ਸਵਭਾਵਿਕ ਅਤੇ ਪ੍ਰਭਾਵਸ਼ਾਲੀ ਅੰਗਰੇਜ਼ੀ ਬੋਲਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੁਕਾਵਟ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਤੁਸੀਂ ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਅਤੇ ਸੰਖੇਪ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਪ੍ਰਗਟ ਕਰਨ ਦੀ ਕੋਸ਼ਿਸ਼ ਕਰੋ।
範例: Yes, I like singing because it helps me feel better when I am sad. Listening to songs motivates me and makes my mindset more positive.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 55.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਨਹੀਂ ਹੈ ਅਤੇ ਕੁਝ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਗਲਤ ਹੈ। ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਹੀ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਵਰਤੋਂ ਕਰੋ ਜੋ ਸਵਾਲ ਦਾ ਸਿੱਧਾ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣ।
範例: No, I have never learned to sing professionally. I only sing for my own entertainment in my free time.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 45.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਗ੍ਰੈਮਰ ਅਤੇ ਵਾਕ-ਰਚਨਾ ਦੀਆਂ ਗਲਤੀਆਂ ਹਨ ਜੋ ਸਵਾਲ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਜਵਾਬ ਦੇਣ ਵਿੱਚ ਰੁਕਾਵਟ ਪੈਦਾ ਕਰਦੀਆਂ ਹਨ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਸਧਾਰਨ ਅਤੇ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਤਰੀਕੇ ਨਾਲ ਪ੍ਰਗਟ ਕਰੋ।
範例: In the future, if I get married, I would like to sing a romantic song for my soulmate on our special day.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 50.0建議: ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਵਿੱਚ ਵਾਕਾਂਸ਼ਾਂ ਦੀ ਸਹੀ ਬਣਤਰ ਅਤੇ ਲਿੰਕਿੰਗ ਸ਼ਬਦਾਂ ਦੀ ਘਾਟ ਹੈ। ਆਪਣੇ ਵਿਚਾਰਾਂ ਨੂੰ ਲਾਜ਼ਮੀ ਤੌਰ 'ਤੇ ਲਿੰਕ ਕਰਨ ਲਈ ਸਹੀ ਸ਼ਬਦ ਵਰਤੋ ਅਤੇ ਜਵਾਬ ਨੂੰ ਸਪਸ਼ਟ ਬਣਾਓ।
範例: Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people because nowadays everyone faces a lot of stress. Singing or listening to songs daily can help reduce stress and improve mood.
文法
× Yes, I like singing because if I have to feel the any negative thought in my mind and feel more depressed that time I will to listen the song.
✓ Yes, I like singing because if I feel any negative thoughts in my mind and feel more depressed at that time, I will listen to songs.
The phrase 'have to feel' is incorrect; it should be 'feel' to express a condition. 'Will to listen' is incorrect; modal verb 'will' should be followed directly by the base verb 'listen'. Also, 'the any negative thought' is incorrect article usage; 'any negative thoughts' is correct. 'At that time' is the correct prepositional phrase.
× They are the motivate and encourage to me and my mindset are show the positive after listen thus.
✓ They motivate and encourage me, and my mindset shows positivity after listening to them.
Incorrect use of pronouns and verb forms: 'They are the motivate and encourage to me' should be 'They motivate and encourage me'. 'My mindset are show' should be 'my mindset shows'. 'After listen thus' should be 'after listening to them'.
× No, I am not to the learn about singing because I am singing for only own entertainment in the free time.
✓ No, I have not learned about singing because I sing only for my own entertainment in my free time.
'I am not to the learn' is incorrect modal and infinitive usage; correct form is 'I have not learned'. 'I am singing for only own entertainment' should be 'I sing only for my own entertainment' to express habitual action.
× I am not to sing as a professional.
✓ I do not sing as a professional.
'I am not to sing' is incorrect modal verb usage; the correct form is 'I do not sing' to express habitual action or fact.
× In future I believe that if I have to marriage that time I will do sing the song to my soul for my soul mate because it's a special occasion for me and her.
✓ In the future, I believe that if I get married, I will sing a song to my soulmate because it's a special occasion for both of us.
'If I have to marriage' is incorrect; correct is 'if I get married'. 'I will do sing the song' is incorrect; correct is 'I will sing a song'. 'My soul for my soul mate' is unclear; corrected to 'to my soulmate'. Also, article 'the' before 'future' is needed.
× So that time I will do want to sing the any romance.
✓ So at that time, I will want to sing a romantic song.
'I will do want' is incorrect modal verb usage; correct is 'I will want'. 'The any romance' is incorrect quantifier and noun usage; correct is 'a romantic song'. 'So that time' should be 'So at that time'.
× Definitely singing can bring the happiness to the face on people 'cause today time every person have to face the large amount of stress on her body and mind.
✓ Definitely, singing can bring happiness to people's faces because nowadays everyone faces a large amount of stress on their body and mind.
'The happiness' is incorrect; 'happiness' is uncountable and does not need 'the' here. 'The face on people' is incorrect; correct is 'people's faces'. 'Today time' is incorrect; correct is 'nowadays'. 'Every person have' is subject-verb agreement error; correct is 'everyone faces'. 'Her body and mind' is incorrect pronoun; should be 'their body and mind'.
× So singing is a better platform if any person can sing and listen the song in daily routine so they can to get the better.
✓ So singing is a better platform; if a person can sing and listen to songs daily, they can improve.
'Listen the song' is incorrect; correct is 'listen to songs'. 'In daily routine' should be 'daily' or 'in their daily routine'. 'They can to get the better' is incorrect; correct is 'they can improve' or 'get better'.
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