唱歌— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like singing? Why?
考生
Well, yes, actually I do really like singing, uh, especially singing together with my friends. I love singing because every time when I sing I feel very relaxed and feel comfortable still when I go to the KTV.
考官
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
考生
Now I haven't learned any singing skills. I just, I just uh, seeing the way I feel comfortable and relax. So I'm not very professional. I just love to singing with my friend and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friend.
考官
Who do you want to sing for?
考生
Well I haven't thought about this question before but if I do really need to pick one person in my life I would say my older sister because we always have fun together and I just want to sing something funny song like Baby shark for her. Like make her.
考官
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
考生
Yes, I truly believe seeing can bring happiness to people. For instance, music always has the power and energy to express to the people and let them feel enjoyful and happiness. Overall though, I think it is very.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like singing? Why?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答中有较多的口头语（如"uh"），影响流畅性。句子结构较为简单，且部分表达重复（如"feel very relaxed and feel comfortable"），建议减少重复表达，使用更丰富的词汇和句式，使回答更自然流畅。
範例: Yes, I really enjoy singing, especially when I sing with my friends. It helps me relax and feel at ease, particularly when we go to karaoke bars together.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答中存在语法错误（如"seeing"应为"singing"），表达不够清晰，且有重复和冗余。建议注意语法准确性，简洁表达观点，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: No, I haven't received any formal singing lessons. I just sing for fun because it makes me feel relaxed, especially when I sing with my close friends.
Who do you want to sing for?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰（如"Like make her"不完整）。建议提前组织答案，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更连贯。
範例: I haven't thought about this before, but if I had to choose, I would sing for my older sister because we always have fun together. I would probably sing a funny song like "Baby Shark" to make her laugh.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
分數: 50.0建議: 回答中存在拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，使用完整句子，并提供具体例子支持观点。
範例: Yes, I truly believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, music has the power to express emotions and make people feel joyful and relaxed.
文法
× I just love to singing with my friend and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friend.
✓ I just love to sing with my friend and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friend.
动词不定式to后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式。这里的love后面接的是不定式to sing，而不是to singing。
× I just love to singing with my friend and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friend.
✓ I just love to sing with my friends and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friends.
friend和close friend在这里指的是多个朋友，应该用复数形式friends和close friends。
× Yes, I truly believe seeing can bring happiness to people.
✓ Yes, I truly believe singing can bring happiness to people.
这里的seeing是拼写错误，应该是singing，表示“唱歌”。
× music always has the power and energy to express to the people and let them feel enjoyful and happiness.
✓ music always has the power and energy to express to the people and let them feel joyful and happy.
形容词enjoyful用法不当，正确的形容词是joyful，表示“快乐的”；happiness是名词，应该用形容词happy来修饰feel。
× I just love to singing with my friend and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friend.
✓ I just love to sing with my friends and love to enjoy the phenomena with my close friends.
phenomena是phenomenon的复数形式，前面用复数名词时，close friend也应使用复数形式close friends。
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