唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından daha net ve doğal ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve öz tutarak, neden şarkı söylemeyi sevdiğinizi açıkça belirtmelisiniz.

範例: Yes, I have loved singing since I was a child. I started singing at the age of eight, mostly American songs. Now, I enjoy singing at home as a hobby.

建議: Cevabınızı daha akıcı ve tutarlı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, "etcetera" yerine spesifik örnekler vermek daha etkili olur.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons, but I attended courses for musical instruments like piano and guitar. However, I taught myself how to sing at home.

建議: Cümlenizde bazı ifadeler anlam açısından karışık. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, "obsessed" kelimesi yerine daha uygun bir kelime seçmelisiniz.

範例: I want to sing for my family because they mean a lot to me. My dream is to write a song dedicated to them and also to my pets, who I love very much.

建議: Cevabınızı daha mantıklı ve akıcı yapmak için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın. Ayrıca, fikirlerinizi daha net ifade edin.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people. Although some think they lack talent and avoid singing, if given a chance, most would enjoy it. Singing is similar to dancing; I don't like dancing in public, but I enjoy it alone.

× Yes, I like singing so much when I was a child and now I'm a home singer.

✓ Yes, I liked singing so much when I was a child and now I'm a home singer.

The verb 'like' should be in the past tense 'liked' to correctly refer to a past habit or feeling when the subject was a child.

× It's like a little professional, but I love singing you and I was started to 8 I think, with an American songs.

✓ It's like I'm a little professional, but I love singing and I started at 8, I think, with American songs.

The phrase 'like a little professional' is unclear; 'like I'm a little professional' is clearer. 'I love singing you' is incorrect; it should be 'I love singing'. 'I was started to 8' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I started at 8'. Also, 'an American songs' is incorrect; 'American songs' without 'an' is correct.

× No, but I went to musical instrumental courses and piano, guitar and etcetera, but never singing.

✓ No, but I went to musical instrument courses for piano, guitar, etc., but never for singing.

The phrase 'musical instrumental courses' is awkward; 'musical instrument courses' is better. Also, 'and etcetera' is redundant; 'etc.' suffices. Adding 'for' before 'piano, guitar' clarifies the meaning.

× But I learned by myself at home.

✓ But I have learned by myself at home.

Since the learning is relevant to the present, the present perfect tense 'have learned' is more appropriate than simple past 'learned'.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing to?

The verb 'sing' is usually followed by 'to' when indicating the audience or person receiving the singing.

× so if I had a chance, I'd ride.

✓ so if I had a chance, I'd write.

The word 'ride' is incorrect in context; the intended verb is 'write' as the student wants to write songs.

× I'll write for my family and my pets.

✓ I'll write songs for my family and my pets.

Adding 'songs' clarifies the object of 'write' and improves sentence clarity.

× everyone likes singing, but generally some people don't like singing because they don't have any talent about singing.

✓ everyone likes singing, but generally some people don't like singing because they don't have any talent for singing.

The preposition 'about' is incorrect here; 'talent for singing' is the correct collocation.

× They think like that.

✓ They think that way.

The phrase 'think like that' is less natural; 'think that way' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× But if I if we gave a chance to anyone, they really love singing.

✓ But if we gave anyone a chance, they would really love singing.

The sentence has redundancy and incorrect conditional structure; 'if we gave anyone a chance' and 'they would really love singing' is the correct conditional form.

× Singing is really good, like dancing.

✓ Singing is really good, like dancing is.

The comparison is incomplete; adding 'is' after 'dancing' completes the comparison.

× I don't like dancing, but I like dancing by myself.

✓ I don't like dancing with others, but I like dancing by myself.

Clarifying 'dancing by myself' by contrasting with 'dancing with others' improves meaning and pronoun use.