唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'singing' multiple times and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, consider adding a specific example to enrich your response.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress. For instance, when I feel overwhelmed, I often sing along to my favorite songs, which instantly lifts my mood.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'Peach and the melody'. Try to use correct grammar and clarify your points. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating ideas already mentioned. Use linking words to improve coherence.

範例: No, I have never formally learned how to sing, so I'm not a professional. However, I enjoy singing along to songs because it makes me happy and helps me relax, even if I'm not perfect with pitch or melody.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more varied vocabulary. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide a bit more detail.

範例: If I were to sing for someone, I would choose my partner because singing is a heartfelt way to express my feelings, and I believe he would appreciate it.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and add a specific example to support your point.

範例: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because people often sing together during festivals, creating a joyful and festive atmosphere that everyone enjoys.

× I never learned how to sing before so I am not a professional singer, but I feel like singing can bring me happiness and help me to reduce my stress.

✓ I have never learned how to sing before, so I am not a professional singer, but I feel like singing can bring me happiness and help me to reduce my stress.

The sentence uses 'never learned' which is simple past tense, but the adverb 'before' suggests an experience up to now, so present perfect tense 'have never learned' is more appropriate to indicate an experience in the past with relevance to the present.

× So I would just sing along with the song and I don't care about the Peach and the melody.

✓ So I would just sing along with the song and I don't care about the pitch and the melody.

The word 'Peach' is a misspelling or incorrect word here. The correct word is 'pitch' which refers to the highness or lowness of a musical note. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects meaning.

× If I need to sing for someone, I would like to sing for my partner because I think it is a way to express my feeling to him through singing and I think he would like that.

✓ If I need to sing for someone, I would like to sing for my partner because I think it is a way to express my feelings to him through singing and I think he would like that.

The word 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' because it refers to emotions in general. Using singular 'feeling' here is incorrect when talking about expressing emotions.

× Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because most of the people celebrating festival or things through singing together and I like the atmosphere of singing to celebrate festival.

✓ Yes, I do think singing can bring happiness to people because most people celebrate festivals or events through singing together and I like the atmosphere of singing to celebrate festivals.

The phrase 'most of the people celebrating festival or things' is incorrect. It should be 'most people celebrate festivals or events' to use the correct verb form and plural nouns. Also, 'festival' should be plural 'festivals' to match the context. The preposition 'of' after 'most' is unnecessary here.