唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve pronunciation and vocabulary (use 'sing' not 'see/singing' confusion). Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Keep sentences short and natural (max 5). Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

範例: Yes, I like singing, but I'm not very good at it. For example, my pitch is often off, so I feel embarrassed when others listen. However, I still enjoy singing because it relaxes me.

建議: Use correct grammar (present perfect: 'have never taken') and avoid redundancy. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then give a concise reason with one specific detail. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because my parents thought I had no natural talent. Therefore, they didn't enroll me in classes when I was a child.

建議: Answer directly (name a person or 'myself/alone') and give a brief specific reason. Correct tense and word choice ('sing' not 'see', 'when I shower' not 'taking the shower'). Use linking words like 'because' to connect reason.

範例: I usually prefer to sing alone, especially when I'm in the shower, because it's private and I don't worry about bothering anyone. Singing there helps me relax.

建議: Good idea and coherence—maintain correct tense and smoother phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points, using linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance'. Keep sentences natural and avoid awkward wording ('make me happy and enjoyable' -> 'make me feel happier').

範例: Definitely. Singing can lift people's mood because the melody and rhythm affect emotions. For example, when I'm stressed I sing on my balcony to calm down and express how I feel.

× I like seeing very much, but I'm not good at seeing to be honest. My seeing some are very terrible that nearly no one wanted to hear.

✓ I like singing very much, but I'm not good at singing to be honest. Some of my songs are so terrible that nearly no one wants to hear them.

The student repeatedly used 'seeing' instead of 'singing' (word choice/spelling). 'My seeing some are very terrible' has wrong word order and countability: use 'Some of my songs' (plural noun) and 'are so terrible that' is the correct structure. 'Nearly no one wanted to hear' mixes past tense with present meaning; use present 'wants to hear'. Also add the object 'them' to refer to 'songs'. Suggestions: learn correct noun 'song' and match verb tenses and subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'no one wants'). Grammar problem type IDs: apply 6:Present tense issue; 1:Singular and plural issue; 27:Subject-verb agreement errors.

× I have never took sing lessons because when I was a child, although I enjoy seeing songs, but my parents found that I'm have no talented in singing at all so they didn't try to cultivate this ability.

✓ I have never taken singing lessons because when I was a child, although I enjoyed singing songs, my parents found that I did not have any talent in singing so they did not try to cultivate this ability.

Use the past participle 'taken' with the present perfect 'have never taken'. 'Sing lessons' should be 'singing lessons' (gerund as noun). 'Although I enjoy' should match time frame 'when I was a child' so use past 'enjoyed'. 'I'm have no talented' is ungrammatical: correct is 'did not have any talent' (use 'talent' as noun and simple past). Avoid using both 'although' and 'but' together; remove 'but'. Suggestions: practice verb forms—past vs present perfect—and gerunds vs base verbs. Grammar problem type IDs: apply 9:Verb in the past participle form; 5:Past tense issue; 8:Verb + -ing form; 12:Incorrect use of pronouns/phrasing.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This question sentence from the examiner is correct. No correction needed. Keep as is. Grammar problem type IDs: none (no error).

× But to be honest I just enjoy seeing some alone especially when I was taking the shower because I think that it is a privacy space and it not bother others anymore.

✓ To be honest, I just enjoy singing alone, especially when I am taking a shower, because I think it is a private space and it does not bother others.

Use 'singing' not 'seeing'. 'Enjoy singing alone'—place 'alone' after verb. Match tense: 'especially when I am taking a shower' or 'when I take a shower' (present habitual). 'A privacy space' is incorrect; use 'a private space'. 'It not bother others' needs auxiliary and subject-verb agreement: 'it does not bother others'. Suggestions: learn adjectives vs nouns ('private' vs 'privacy'), use correct auxiliaries for negatives, and keep consistent tense. Grammar problem type IDs: apply 8:Verb + -ing form; 6:Present tense issue; 11:Incorrect use of prepositions; 13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs; 27:Subject-verb agreement errors.

× Definitely yes. Besides the lyrics, the tone itself can make me happy and enjoyable when I was stressed or nervous. I love to sing songs alone on the balcony to express my emotions.

✓ Definitely yes. Besides the lyrics, the melody itself can make me feel happy and relaxed when I am stressed or nervous. I love to sing alone on the balcony to express my emotions.

'Tone' is ambiguous; 'melody' or 'music' fits better. 'Can make me happy and enjoyable' is incorrect: 'make me feel happy and relaxed' or 'make me happy'—'enjoyable' describes things, not feelings. 'When I was stressed or nervous' should be present or general: 'when I am stressed or nervous'. 'Sing songs alone' is redundant; 'sing alone' is sufficient. Suggestions: choose correct nouns (melody/music), use 'feel' with emotions, maintain present-tense general statements. Grammar problem type IDs: apply 6:Present tense issue; 13:Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs; 19:Incorrect comparison object (word choice).