列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在较多错误，导致意思难以理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单明了的语言表达观点。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. I prefer to buy only what I need and sometimes some toys that I like.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并且用连接词使回答更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have important tasks like final exams. It helps me keep track of deadlines and manage my time better.

建議: 表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their freedom. They prefer a more spontaneous lifestyle without strict plans.

建議: 回答较为清晰，但有重复和小错误。建议注意句子流畅性，避免重复，并适当使用连接词。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many apps that remind me when tasks are due. This makes it more convenient than using paper.

× No I'm not I'm hardly busy laced by shop because I'm on the park playback person I heart.

✓ No, I'm not. I'm hardly busy lately because I'm a park playback person I heart.

句子中时态和表达不清晰，'hardly busy laced by shop'不符合英语表达习惯，应改为'hardly busy lately'表示最近不忙。

× I'm hardly busy laced by shop because I'm on the park playback person I heart.

✓ I'm hardly busy lately because I'm a park playback person I heart.

'laced by shop'和'on the park playback person'的介词使用错误，应改为正确的表达。

× I do not prefer to make the To Do List when I do something and like shopping.

✓ I do not prefer to make a To Do List when I do something like shopping.

'the To Do List'使用不当，应该用不定冠词'a'，且'and like shopping'结构不正确，应改为'like shopping'。

× I just want to buy something that I need and I will buy some toys that I like but I did not make the.

✓ I just want to buy something that I need, and I will buy some toys that I like, but I did not make a list.

句子结构不完整，缺少宾语，'did not make the'后应补充宾语'list'。

× Yeah, I just made the list when I do seven quarter work, for example, when I have the final exam and I will make the list and to remain in the deadline.

✓ Yeah, I just made the list when I did some quarter work. For example, when I had the final exam, I made the list to meet the deadline.

时态使用错误，描述过去的事情应使用过去时，'do'应改为'did'，'have'改为'had'，'will make'改为'made'。

× I will make the list and to remain in the deadline.

✓ I will make the list to meet the deadline.

'remain in the deadline'介词使用错误，应改为'to meet the deadline'。

× I think it's have the significantly changed in my life because it made me know the time that I need to submit.

✓ I think it has significantly changed my life because it made me know the time I need to submit.

'it's have'错误，应为'it has'，'the significantly changed'结构错误，应为'significantly changed'。

× People don't prefer to make it past maybe because they think plan is a little limited their life and it's not free for them.

✓ People don't prefer to make lists maybe because they think plans limit their life a little and it's not free for them.

'make it past'表达错误，应为'make lists'，'plan is a little limited their life'语法错误，应为'plans limit their life a little'。

× They want the free lifestyle and not restrict by the this make to do this.

✓ They want a free lifestyle and not to be restricted by having to do this.

句子结构混乱，'not restrict by the this make to do this'不符合语法，应改为'not to be restricted by having to do this'。

× I prefer to make the list on my phone because for there are many apps on Google and when time is up it it will remind me to finish my To Do List.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because there are many apps on Google, and when time is up, it will remind me to finish my To Do List.

'because for there are'介词使用错误，应去掉'for'。

× So I think making the list on the phone is more convenient.

✓ So I think making the list on the phone is more convenient.

句子结构正确，无需修改。