列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Please try to use correct verb tenses and sentence structures to make your answer clearer and more natural. Also, avoid redundancy and try to organize your ideas logically with linking words.

範例: When I was in the United States, I made a shopping list because my host family ordered items for me. However, in Thailand, I rarely make a list because I prefer to browse in the mall and buy whatever catches my eye, which sometimes leads me to spend more money.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically. Avoid unclear phrases and focus on explaining how making a list helps you prioritize tasks.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. When I have many things to do, I list them and start with the most important ones. This way, I can focus better and feel satisfied when I complete each task before moving to the next.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and unclear expressions. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it too much work. Instead, they prefer to do tasks as they come. However, this method makes it hard to prioritize important tasks, so I believe making a list is better.

建議: Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid unclear phrases like 'tap on in front of my table'. Also, explain your preference with reasons and use linking words for coherence.

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper and keep it on my desk when I start working. However, if I don't finish all tasks in one day, I use my phone to update the list. This helps me remember what I need to do and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

× I did a list when I go to shop when I was in the United States because I have to find the list in the shop by ordering from our my host family.

✓ I made a list when I went shopping when I was in the United States because I had to find the list in the shop by ordering from my host family.

The verb 'did' is incorrect for the action of creating a list; 'made' is the correct past tense verb. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'went shopping' to match past tense and correct verb form. 'Have to' should be 'had to' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Our my host family' is incorrect; 'my host family' is correct.

× But when I am in Thailand, I didn't do it often because I just like go to look aloud in the shopping mall and look and see what I would like to get and I spend a lot of money.

✓ But when I was in Thailand, I didn't do it often because I just liked to walk around in the shopping mall and see what I would like to get, and I spent a lot of money.

The sentence mixes present tense 'am' with past tense 'didn't do'. It should be consistent in past tense: 'was'. 'Like go to look aloud' is incorrect; it should be 'liked to walk around'. 'Spend' should be 'spent' to match past tense.

× Yes, I do, because it's very helpful for me when we have a lot of work and it's my detach.

✓ Yes, I do, because it's very helpful for me when I have a lot of work and it's my task.

'Detach' is incorrect here; likely the intended word is 'task'. Also, 'we have' should be 'I have' to match the subject 'me'.

× Your brain is that confusing what I'm going to do first, so I make a list and then I start with the issue 1/3 because you will get helpful for you and fulfill your mind.

✓ Your brain gets confused about what to do first, so I make a list and then start with issue one because it helps you and clears your mind.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Your brain is that confusing' is incorrect; it should be 'Your brain gets confused'. 'I start with the issue 1/3' is unclear; 'start with issue one' is clearer. 'You will get helpful for you and fulfill your mind' is incorrect; 'it helps you and clears your mind' is better.

× OK, I finished it one the next one is coming. I'm lady something like that. I like coming you.

✓ OK, I finish one task and then the next one comes. I'm like that. I like it that way.

The original sentences are unclear and ungrammatical. 'I finished it one the next one is coming' should be 'I finish one task and then the next one comes'. 'I'm lady something like that' is unclear; likely 'I'm like that' is intended. 'I like coming you' is incorrect; 'I like it that way' fits better.

× I thinks in my opinion, I think The thing is, uh, too much work for them and they just do what is coming first, first come first.

✓ I think, in my opinion, the thing is that there is too much work for them and they just do whatever comes first, first come first served.

'I thinks' is incorrect; should be 'I think'. 'The thing is, uh, too much work for them' lacks a verb; 'there is too much work for them' is correct. 'Do what is coming first' should be 'do whatever comes first'.

× Some something like this, but I don't think so because you cannot prioritize which one is the most important and which one not the most important.

✓ Something like that, but I don't think so because you cannot prioritize which one is the most important and which one is not the most important.

'Some something like this' is incorrect; 'Something like that' is correct. 'Which one not the most important' is missing 'is'; it should be 'which one is not the most important'.

× You can wait. So do the least is better than not.

✓ You can wait. So doing the least is better than not doing anything.

'So do the least is better than not' is ungrammatical. It should be 'So doing the least is better than not doing anything' to make sense and be grammatically correct.

× I prefer to make a list on paper and tap on in front of my table when I start working.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper and keep it in front of my table when I start working.

'Tap on in front of my table' is incorrect. Likely intended is 'keep it in front of my table'. 'Tap on' is not appropriate here.

× If I'm not finished on the day, I will make a list on my phone There's so I can remember what I have to do and what I have to continue.

✓ If I haven't finished during the day, I will make a list on my phone so I can remember what I have to do and what I have to continue.

'Not finished on the day' is incorrect; 'not finished during the day' or 'haven't finished during the day' is correct. 'There's so' is incorrect; should be 'so'.