列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sắp xếp ý theo trình tự hợp lý. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: When I was young, I didn't make shopping lists because I didn't buy many things. However, now I make lists to help me remember what to buy and avoid forgetting items.

建議: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn về việc có làm danh sách công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó. Câu trả lời hiện tại thiếu sự liên kết và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể hơn về cảm nhận của bạn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. However, sometimes I find it too strict and difficult to follow exactly, so I try to be flexible when necessary.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to work more flexibly rather than following a strict plan.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sắp xếp ý theo trình tự hợp lý và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để thể hiện sở thích của mình một cách rõ ràng.

範例: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer to make lists on paper. If I don't have paper, I use my phone instead.

× When I was small, I don't, I don't use to make this when I shop because when I because I have I don't have to buy a lot of things.

✓ When I was small, I didn't use to make a list when I shopped because I didn't have to buy a lot of things.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'don't' and 'use to' together. The correct modal verb form for past habits is 'didn't use to'. Also, the verb tense should be past ('shopped') to match the time frame 'when I was small'.

× But when I grow older, I don't know why, but I have to make this because I can't remember the things I wanna buy.

✓ But when I grew older, I don't know why, I had to make a list because I couldn't remember the things I wanted to buy.

The sentence mixes present tense 'grow' with past context. It should be past tense 'grew' to match the narrative. Also, 'have to' should be past 'had to' and 'can't' should be 'couldn't' to maintain past tense consistency. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'wanted'.

× Yes, yes, I make a list for my work. I used to make it and I don't know why, but every time I make this I feel.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. I used to make it, and I don't know why, but every time I make one, I feel...

The sentence is mostly correct but 'make this' is awkward; 'make one' or 'make a list' is better. Also, the sentence is incomplete but grammatically acceptable.

× I feel it's very strictly and I can't follow it.

✓ I feel it's very strict, and I can't follow it.

'Strictly' is an adverb, but the sentence needs an adjective to describe 'it'. 'Strict' is the correct adjective form here.

× I think the first thing is they like it and they want their work is more strictly like they have to do what they list in at that time.

✓ I think the first thing is they don't like it because they want their work to be less strict; they don't want to have to do what is on their list at that time.

The original sentence has pronoun confusion and incorrect structure. 'They want their work is more strictly' is incorrect; it should be 'they want their work to be more strict' or 'less strict' depending on meaning. Also, 'do what they list in at that time' is unclear and needs rephrasing.

× So and that maybe help them to complete complete work more faster, complete work faster.

✓ So maybe that helps them complete their work faster.

'More faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is already a comparative form. 'Complete complete work' is repetitive. The sentence should be concise and grammatically correct.

× I think is based on different situation, but with me I will prefer to make a list on paper.

✓ I think it depends on the situation, but for me, I prefer to make a list on paper.

'I think is based on different situation' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it depends on the situation'. Also, 'with me I will prefer' is awkward; 'for me, I prefer' is better.

× I guess if there are no paper I will use my phone, but if then have my phone I like, if there's no phone I will.

✓ I guess if there is no paper, I will use my phone, but if I don't have my phone, I will...

The sentence has pronoun and structure errors. 'There are no paper' should be 'there is no paper' because 'paper' is uncountable. 'If then have my phone I like' is unclear and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.