列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and finish your sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain why it works. Also, avoid awkward phrasing and check grammar.

範例: Yes, I use my laptop and mobile to set reminders for my work tasks. This method works well because it helps me meet deadlines and organize my schedule efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete with many hesitations. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and complete your thoughts. Give specific reasons and examples. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because it can be tedious to do every day. Also, if they have few tasks, they might not see the need for a list.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to finish your sentences and explain your reasons clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to compare options.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can set reminders. However, paper lists require pens and can be easy to lose.

× Yes, I love making lists whenever I go to shopping or maybe buying something because making a list will help me organize things and it will help me not to miss anything to buy when I get home.

✓ Yes, I love making lists whenever I go shopping or maybe buy something because making a list helps me organize things and helps me not to miss anything to buy when I get home.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' because 'shopping' functions as a gerund here without the preposition 'to'. Also, 'maybe buying something' should be 'maybe buy something' to maintain parallel structure with 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'making a list will help me' can be simplified to 'making a list helps me' for clarity and tense consistency.

× So remembering a lot of things to buy is very tedious as well as it is very inconvenience so I will.

✓ So remembering a lot of things to buy is very tedious as well as very inconvenient, so I will.

The word 'inconvenience' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe the situation. The correct adjective form is 'inconvenient'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear at the end; it should be completed or rephrased for clarity.

× I take the help of a laptop and mobile for not making any reminders to complete the list of work that I have to do by the end of the day.

✓ I use a laptop and mobile to set reminders to complete the list of work that I have to do by the end of the day.

The phrase 'take the help of' is awkward and incorrect; 'use' is more appropriate. Also, 'for not making any reminders' is incorrect; the intended meaning is to set reminders, so 'to set reminders' is correct.

× And it absolutely works because it makes my job much more convenient as well as I meet all the deadlines and I plan and schedule the work based on the list which is very.

✓ And it absolutely works because it makes my job much more convenient, and I meet all the deadlines. I plan and schedule the work based on the list, which is very helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity at the end. Adding 'helpful' completes the thought. Also, the sentence is long and can be split for better clarity and flow.

× I think most people don't want to make a list because it is quite tedious and monotonous to make a list on a daily basis.

✓ I think most people don't want to make a list because it is quite tedious and monotonous to make a list daily.

The phrase 'on a daily basis' is correct but can be simplified to 'daily' for conciseness. No major error here, but simplification improves clarity.

× And sometimes people might not, uh, have to use, uh, might not have to have a lot of things to do on the daily basis.

✓ And sometimes people might not have a lot of things to do daily.

The original sentence is redundant and confusing with repeated phrases. Simplifying it removes unnecessary words and clarifies the meaning.

× I think he can be.

✓ I think he can be hardworking.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the adjective to describe 'he'. Adding 'hardworking' completes the thought.

× I think making list on the phone is quite convenient and easier because you might take the help of reminders and the note taking to help is more effectively.

✓ I think making a list on the phone is quite convenient and easier because you can use reminders, and note-taking helps more effectively.

The phrase 'making list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. Also, 'the note taking to help is more effectively' is awkward; rephrasing to 'note-taking helps more effectively' is clearer.

× And similarly if you use paper then you might need additional stationary, maybe pen and you need to remember and you need to have.

✓ Similarly, if you use paper, then you might need additional stationery, maybe a pen, and you need to remember to carry them.

'Stationary' is incorrect; the correct word is 'stationery' meaning writing materials. Also, 'maybe pen' should be 'maybe a pen'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.