列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议注意句子结构，避免使用错误的疑问句形式，改为陈述句。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy.

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

範例: Yes, I often make a timetable when I work, and I follow it strictly. It really helps me improve my efficiency.

建議: 回答中有语法错误且表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并具体说明原因。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to stick to them.

建議: 回答表达较为自然，但有小的语法错误和用词不当。建议注意冠词使用和复数形式。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because when I use my phone, I often get distracted by other apps like WeChat and TikTok.

× Yes, because making a list can help me remember what do I need to buy.

✓ Yes, because making a list can help me remember what I need to buy.

在宾语从句中，陈述句语序应为主语+谓语，不能使用疑问句语序。这里应改为“what I need to buy”。

× Of course, I often make a timetable when I when I am working and I will adopt it when I working.

✓ Of course, I often make a timetable when I am working and I will adopt it when I am working.

动词短语中缺少助动词“am”，导致语法错误。现在进行时需要“be动词+动词ing”，这里应为“when I am working”。

× Because I think for most of the people it is very difficult to follow the follow it.

✓ Because I think for most people it is very difficult to follow it.

“most of the people”中“the”不必要且冗余，应简化为“most people”。另外，“follow the follow it”重复，应去掉多余的“the follow”。

× I prefer making a list on my paper because when I'm making a list in my phone, I always distract my attention to play the other app like WeChat and Tiktok.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper because when I'm making a list on my phone, I always get distracted by other apps like WeChat and TikTok.

“on my paper”应为“on paper”，表示用纸。手机上应使用介词“on”，不是“in”。“distract my attention”表达不当，应为“get distracted by”。“the other app”应为复数“other apps”。