列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and focus on clear, concise sentences. Use correct vocabulary such as 'list' instead of 'less' and 'organized' instead of 'organisable'. Also, provide a clear reason and example to support your answer.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Avoid filler words and use correct phrases like 'to-do list' and 'organized'. Make your sentences clearer and more structured. Explain how the list helps you with your tasks specifically.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete all my tasks without forgetting anything.

建議: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Use correct vocabulary like 'set a goal' and 'list'. Provide a more detailed explanation with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously and don't want to set specific goals, which sometimes means they don't complete all their tasks.

建議: Reduce filler words and improve sentence structure. Use clearer reasons and linking words to explain your preference. For example, mention ease of reading or less distraction.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because it's easier to read and I find it less distracting than using digital devices.

× I usually make a list when I uh go to the shop to buy uh many to buy a things.

✓ I usually make a list when I go to the shop to buy many things.

The phrase 'a things' is incorrect because 'things' is plural and should not be preceded by the singular article 'a'. Also, 'many to buy a things' is redundant and ungrammatical. The correct form is 'buy many things'.

× So uh, because I think doing a less is more organisable and professional way to bring all the stuff uh, also I can.

✓ So, I think making a list is a more organized and professional way to bring all the stuff, and I can also do that.

The word 'organisable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'organized'. Also, 'doing a less' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. The sentence structure is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I usually make a do list uh, for my work, uh, because I think it is uh, something is professional and organizable to have a do list uh, it also worth it because, uh, I can follow all my tasks without any disruptive or thinking about what.

✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work because I think it is professional and organized to have a to-do list. It is also worth it because I can follow all my tasks without any disruption or having to think about what to do next.

The phrase 'a do list' should be 'a to-do list'. 'Organizable' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'organized'. 'Disruptive' is an adjective but the noun 'disruption' is needed here. The sentence is also restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm not sure but I think most of people like to do random things because they don't like to sit a goal and or making any uh less.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think most people like to do random things because they don't like to set goals or make any lists.

The phrase 'most of people' should be 'most people'. 'Sit a goal' is incorrect; it should be 'set goals'. 'Making any uh less' is incorrect; it should be 'make any lists'. The sentence is corrected for proper plural usage and verb forms.

× So they are random and do random things. So umm, they sometimes don't achieve all.

✓ So they are random and do random things. Sometimes, they don't achieve everything.

The phrase 'don't achieve all' is incomplete; it should be 'don't achieve everything' to correctly express the idea. 'All' is a determiner and needs a noun to modify.

× I usually prefer making a list on the paper rather than using my phone, uh, because reading things is more achievable, uh, than, uh, digital devices.

✓ I usually prefer making a list on paper rather than using my phone because reading things on paper is easier than on digital devices.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper' without the definite article. Also, 'more achievable' is not appropriate here; 'easier' is the correct adjective to describe reading. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.