列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体理由。

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. I enjoy browsing and choosing items based on my mood at the moment.

建議: 回答较完整，但存在语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，避免重复。

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work and studies. It helps me stay organized and ensures I complete all my tasks efficiently.

建議: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子，明确表达观点并提供具体原因。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to follow them consistently. If they lose the list, they might feel confused and lose confidence.

建議: 回答中出现矛盾且表达不流畅，建议先明确偏好，再用连贯的句子解释原因。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me focus better. Using my phone can be distracting due to notifications and other apps.

× No, I do not make a list before I go shop.

✓ No, I do not make a list before I go shopping.

动词go后面接动名词形式表示去做某事，go后面不能直接接动词原形shop，应改为shopping。

× I am a very easygoing person when it is about going shop or a daily lives.

✓ I am a very easygoing person when it is about going shopping or daily life.

动词go后应接动名词shopping，且daily lives应为daily life，表示日常生活。

× I just want to be very free when I go shop and I want to buy something.

✓ I just want to be very free when I go shopping and I want to buy something.

go后应接动名词shopping，且句中无量词错误，主要是动词形式错误。

× Would I like when I kick kick the first glance of this?

✓ Would I like it when I see this at first glance?

原句结构混乱，kick kick无意义，应改为see this at first glance，符合表达习惯。

× Does it work? Uh, well, yes. Talk about my work and my study.

✓ Does it work? Uh, well, yes. Talking about my work and my study,

句子中talk应改为动名词形式talking，作为现在分词短语引导，符合语法。

× And I think it works very good.

✓ And I think it works very well.

good是形容词，修饰动词时应使用副词well。

× because I can always keep track with the list and I always do the great job as my expected.

✓ because I can always keep track of the list and I always do a great job as expected.

短语keep track后应接介词of，the great job改为a great job，my expected应去掉my，expected作形容词。

× In my opinion, I think maybe a list is very difficult to keep track to and it's very hard to stick to.

✓ In my opinion, I think maybe a list is very difficult to keep track of and it's very hard to stick to.

短语keep track后应接介词of，而不是to。

× So if somebody fails to lose this list, they will be they will be not very confident about this and be distracted.

✓ So if somebody fails to keep this list, they will not be very confident about it and will be distracted.

fail to lose不合适，应为fail to keep，代词this list后应使用it，且句子重复，应简化。

× Phone For myself, I like to make a list on paper because in the evening I always read a book, take recordings and also make a list for the next day.

✓ For myself, I like to make a list on paper because in the evening I always read a book, take recordings, and also make a list for the next day.

句首Phone位置错误，应放在句尾或去掉，句子结构更通顺。

× I think I wouldn't be distracted when I am do write something on the paper.

✓ I think I wouldn't be distracted when I am writing something on the paper.

am do write结构错误，应改为am writing，使用现在进行时。

× By contrast, I think there are lots of things that attract me.

✓ By contrast, I think there are lots of things that distract me.

根据上下文，attract me应改为distract me，表示分散注意力。