列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating phrases like "buy things that I need to buy." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say why making a list is helpful and give a specific example in one sentence.

範例: Yes, I usually make a grocery list because it helps me remember everything I need. For instance, once I forgot to buy olive oil, which made cooking difficult, so making a list is really important for me.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words like "because" or "so" properly, and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, be specific about how making lists helps you.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work and studies because they help me organize my tasks by priority. When I finish a task, I simply cross it off, which motivates me to keep going.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and completeness. Try to finish your sentences and use linking words like "because" and "however" to connect ideas. Also, explain your points with more specific reasons or examples.

範例: I think it depends on personality. Some people prefer to act spontaneously without planning, so they don't like making lists because they trust their instincts more than written plans.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Make sure to finish your sentences and explain your preferences clearly. Use linking words like "because" to give reasons, and avoid abrupt endings.

範例: I use both paper and my phone to make lists. For example, I write assignment due dates in my planner because it's easy to see everything at once, but I use my phone for quick reminders when I'm on the go.

× So I usually make a listing and if I'm done I just remove the thing on my.

✓ So I usually make a list and if I'm done I just remove the thing on my list.

The word 'listing' is a noun form that is less commonly used in this context. The correct noun to use here is 'list'. Using 'list' is more natural and appropriate when referring to a collection of items to do.

× So for them they don't like making lists because whatever they cross their mind is the most important thing.

✓ So for them, they don't like making lists because whatever crosses their mind is the most important thing.

The sentence has a subject-verb agreement error and awkward phrasing. 'Whatever' is singular, so the verb should be 'crosses' not 'cross'. Adding a comma after 'for them' improves clarity.

× So sometimes.

✓ (This fragment is incomplete and should be connected to the previous or following sentence to form a complete thought.)

'So sometimes.' is a sentence fragment lacking a main verb and complete thought. It should be connected to another sentence or completed to convey a full idea.

× So sometimes I'm writing a assignment due dates on my planner because it's good to see at once.

✓ So sometimes I write assignment due dates on my planner because it's good to see them at once.

The phrase 'I'm writing a assignment due dates' is incorrect. 'Assignment' is singular but 'due dates' is plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'I'm writing' is present continuous, but the simple present 'I write' fits better here. Adding 'them' clarifies what is good to see at once.

× So sometimes I'm writing a assignment due dates on my planner because it's good to see at once.

✓ So sometimes I write assignment due dates on my planner because it's good to see them at once.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun phrase 'assignment due dates'. Articles should agree in number with the noun; here, no article is needed before the plural noun.