列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there is a minor grammatical error ('shop more responsibility' should be 'shop more responsibly'). Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas ('shop more responsibility' and 'saving both time and money' are somewhat redundant). Use linking words to improve coherence, for example, 'because' and 'which'.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. Since I tend to get tempted by attractive things, having a list allows me to stick to my budget and shop more responsibly, which saves both time and money.

建議: There is a grammatical mistake in 'I don't usually made' which should be 'I don't usually make'. Your answer is structured well with examples, but you could improve coherence by using linking words such as 'however' or 'instead'. Also, try to be more specific about how prioritizing helps your work.

範例: I don't usually make a detailed list for my work; instead, I prioritise tasks based on their urgency and importance. For example, I focus on urgent guidelines first, then move on to less pressing tasks. Additionally, I take brief notes to remember key points, which helps me stay organised and focused throughout the day.

建議: Your answer starts well but is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your ideas fully and avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Also, use linking words like 'firstly', 'secondly' to organise your points clearly. Provide more specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

範例: Well, there are several reasons why some people don't like making lists. Firstly, they might feel overwhelmed by the sheer number of tasks, which can make the process stressful and discouraging. For example, seeing a long list can make them anxious rather than motivated. Secondly, some people tend to procrastinate and find lists remind them of their unfinished work, which can be demotivating.

建議: Your answer is relevant and includes examples, but there are some awkward phrases such as 'add added items' and 'assessment notes' which should be corrected to 'add items' and 'access notes'. Also, try to use linking words like 'for instance' and 'moreover' correctly to improve flow.

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it is much more convenient and versatile. For instance, paper lists can easily get lost or damaged, whereas on my phone, I can quickly add items, set reminders, and access notes instantly even when I'm on the go. Moreover, using my phone helps me stay organised.

× Having a list allows me to stick to my budget and shop more responsibility and shop more responsibly, saving both time and money.

✓ Having a list allows me to stick to my budget and shop more responsibly, saving both time and money.

The word 'responsibility' is a noun, but the sentence requires an adverb to describe the verb 'shop'. Therefore, 'responsibly' is the correct form to use here to indicate the manner of shopping.

× I don't usually made a detailed list for my work, but I always prioritize tasks according to their urgency and importance.

✓ I don't usually make a detailed list for my work, but I always prioritize tasks according to their urgency and importance.

After the auxiliary verb 'do' in negative sentences, the base form of the verb should be used. 'Made' is the past tense form, which is incorrect here. The correct form is 'make'.

× Secondly, some people tend to procrastinate and feel.

✓ Secondly, some people tend to procrastinate and feel overwhelmed.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement after 'feel'. To be grammatically correct and meaningful, it needs a complement such as 'overwhelmed' to complete the thought.

× For example, paper lists can easily get lost or damaged, whereas on my phone, I can quickly add added items, set reminders efficiently, and assessment notes instantly even when I'm on the go.

✓ For example, paper lists can easily get lost or damaged, whereas on my phone, I can quickly add items, set reminders efficiently, and take notes instantly even when I'm on the go.

The phrase 'add added items' is redundant and incorrect; 'add items' is correct. Also, 'assessment notes' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'take notes'. The verb 'take' is needed before 'notes' to form a correct verb phrase.