列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be more natural and grammatically correct. Use present tense consistently and avoid redundancy. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves money.

建議: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and improve grammar.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I am a student and I don't have many tasks to manage. Therefore, I find it unnecessary to make lists.

建議: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by using better linking words and correcting grammar. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid repetition.

範例: I think some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory. Additionally, modern technology like alarms and reminders helps them keep track of tasks without writing lists.

建議: Your answer needs to be more complete and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Also, try to be more specific about your preference.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than carrying paper. Phones also have reminder features that help me stay organized.

× Yes, I often make a list whenever I went to shopping.

✓ Yes, I often make a list whenever I go shopping.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'went'. Since 'often' indicates a habitual action, the verb should be in present tense 'go' instead of past tense 'went'.

× whenever I went to shopping

✓ whenever I go shopping

The verb 'go' is used without the preposition 'to' when followed by activities like 'shopping'. So, 'go shopping' is correct, not 'go to shopping'.

× It can help us to remind things and we can shop according to our choice.

✓ It can help us remember things and we can shop according to our choice.

The verb 'remind' is transitive and requires an object; 'remember' is the correct verb here to express recalling things oneself.

× It can stop us but for purchasing a necessary thing and it's saving money.

✓ It can stop us from purchasing unnecessary things and save money.

The phrase 'stop us but for' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'stop us from' followed by a gerund. Also, 'a necessary thing' should be 'unnecessary things' to convey the intended meaning.

× Honestly not, I do not make any list well.

✓ Honestly, no, I do not make any list properly.

The phrase 'not' is incorrectly used; 'no' is appropriate here. Also, 'well' is better replaced with 'properly' to describe the manner of making a list.

× I'm working.

✓ I am working.

Contraction 'I'm' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity, 'I am working' is better. However, this sentence is incomplete in context and may need more information.

× I was just.

✓ I was just a student.

The sentence 'I was just.' is incomplete. Adding 'a student' completes the thought and matches the context.

× I am a student so it's not much work that I want to do.

✓ I am a student, so I do not have much work to do.

The phrase 'it's not much work that I want to do' is awkward. The correct expression is 'I do not have much work to do' to indicate the amount of work.

× So I do not make any list instead I do.

✓ So I do not make any list; instead, I do other things.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. Adding a semicolon and completing the thought improves the sentence structure.

× I believe some people are good at reminding things, so they do not make any list of their work.

✓ I believe some people are good at remembering things, so they do not make any list of their work.

The verb 'remind' is used incorrectly; 'remember' is the correct verb to express recalling things oneself.

× As well as nowadays technology allow us to remind things, we can set alarms.

✓ Also, nowadays technology allows us to remember things; we can set alarms.

The phrase 'allow us to remind things' is incorrect; it should be 'allows us to remember things'. Also, 'allow' should be singular 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'technology'.

× nowadays technology allow us to remind things.

✓ nowadays technology allows us to remember things.

The subject 'technology' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' not 'allow'.

× So this things made people to not make list of requirements.

✓ So these things make people not make lists of requirements.

'This things' is incorrect; it should be 'these things' to match plural noun. Also, 'made' should be 'make' to match present tense. 'List' should be plural 'lists'.

× I do not prefer to make list on paper.

✓ I do not prefer to make a list on paper.

The noun 'list' requires an article 'a' before it.

× keeping a paper in your pocket is not a good idea.

✓ keeping paper in your pocket is not a good idea.

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary when referring to paper in general.

× Nowadays technology allow us to remind things.

✓ Nowadays technology allows us to remember things.

The singular subject 'technology' requires the singular verb 'allows'. Also, 'remind' should be 'remember'.

× So instead of adding a extra paper in your pocket, you can make a list in your.

✓ So instead of adding an extra paper in your pocket, you can make a list on your phone.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an'. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'phone' completes the thought.