列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use plural form 'lists' and avoid redundancy by not repeating 'I usually go for shopping'. Also, try to add a linking phrase to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I usually make lists when I go shopping because they help me save a lot of time and stay organized.

建議: Your answer is quite long and repetitive. Try to make it concise and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, use plural 'lists' and correct grammar such as 'I usually forget small things'.

範例: Yes, I prefer making lists for my work because they save me time. Since I usually forget small things, writing them down helps me recall them and focus better.

建議: There are grammatical errors such as 'doesn't' instead of 'don't' and missing words. Also, avoid sentence fragments like 'because.' Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide more specific reasons.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. However, I believe lists are productive since they help us remember our tasks and stay organized.

建議: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'I can like tear my paper'. Try to be more precise and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'my phone' unnecessarily.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and portable. Unlike paper lists, digital ones are safer since they can't be torn or lost easily.

× Yes, I love making list when I usually go for shopping because it saves me a lot of time.

✓ Yes, I love making lists when I usually go shopping because it saves me a lot of time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making a list. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I prefer making list for my work because it saves me a lot of time and I don't forget anything important after making a list because usually I forget small things so if it is written in a list I can recall it and I can focus on my work.

✓ Yes, I prefer making lists for my work because it saves me a lot of time and I don't forget anything important after making a list because usually I forget small things so if they are written in a list I can recall them and I can focus on my work.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to multiple lists. Also, pronouns referring to 'small things' should be plural 'they' and 'them' to agree in number.

× A few people doesn't like making list because they believe that it is a waste of time.

✓ A few people don't like making lists because they believe that it is a waste of time.

The subject 'people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' instead of 'doesn't'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context.

× But I believe that it is a very productive thing to make list because.

✓ But I believe that it is a very productive thing to make lists because.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to correctly express the general idea of making lists.

× We can never forget our work.

✓ We can never forget our work.

No grammatical error related to the provided problem types in this sentence.

× I prefer making a list on my phone because it is a very convenient and I can carry my phone everywhere with me and it is very safe on my phone because I can like tear my paper.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient and I can carry my phone everywhere with me and it is very safe on my phone because I can tear my paper.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple lists. Also, 'a very convenient' is incorrect; 'convenient' is an adjective and does not need 'a'. The phrase 'I can like tear my paper' is unclear and 'like' should be removed for clarity.