列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it's depend' nên là 'it depends', và dùng từ phù hợp hơn như 'besides' không đúng ngữ cảnh. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên dùng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý tốt hơn.

範例: It depends on the situation. If I have free time, I like to browse and find interesting items. However, if I need to buy something specific, I always make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'So make a list' không phải câu hoàn chỉnh, nên nối với câu trước. Ngoài ra, 'allow me to arrange a task' nên là 'allows me to organize my tasks'. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work because I interact with many people daily. Making a list helps me organize my tasks efficiently and prevents confusion or stress during work.

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ không tự nhiên như 'personality chill and relax' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'make a list a little bit of hard' thành 'making a list is a bit hard'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết logic.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because of their personality. If they are relaxed and easy-going, they might find making lists difficult or uncomfortable.

建議: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Ví dụ, 'it's allow me' nên là 'it allows me'. Câu cuối cùng không rõ nghĩa, bạn nên diễn đạt lại để người nghe hiểu ý bạn muốn nói. Hãy dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ phù hợp.

範例: I prefer writing lists on paper rather than on my phone because it helps me keep track of my notes daily. Also, I find it difficult to share tasks with my partner using my phone while searching for lists.

× For me it's depend on what situation I'm shopping.

✓ For me, it depends on the situation when I'm shopping.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular present tense 'depends' to agree with the subject 'it'. Also, 'what situation' is better expressed as 'the situation when' for clarity.

× find some interesting item.

✓ find some interesting items.

The noun 'item' should be plural 'items' because 'some' indicates more than one item.

× But the besides, if I have something to buy for a reason, I will make a list to make sure that I don't forget some.

✓ But besides, if I have something to buy for a reason, I will make a list to make sure that I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'the besides' is incorrect; 'besides' alone is sufficient. Also, 'some' at the end is vague; 'anything' is more appropriate here.

× So make a list.

✓ So, I make a list.

The sentence lacks a subject; adding 'I' clarifies who makes the list.

× It's convenient and allow me to arrange a task and not make me feel confused or struggle in my working leads.

✓ It's convenient and allows me to arrange tasks and not feel confused or struggle in my work tasks.

The verb 'allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject 'It'. Also, 'arrange a task' should be plural 'tasks' for general meaning. 'Working leads' is unclear; 'work tasks' is clearer.

× If they may have personality chill and relax, they might think make a list a little bit of hard and tricky and sometimes that make them feel uncomfortable.

✓ If they have a chill and relaxed personality, they might think making a list is a little hard and tricky, and sometimes that makes them feel uncomfortable.

'May have' is unnecessary here; 'have' suffices. 'Personality chill and relax' should be 'a chill and relaxed personality'. 'Think make a list' should be 'think making a list'. 'That make' should be 'that makes' to agree with singular subject.

× Uh, it's allow me to keep my data on my notebook every day and for some reason it's hard for me to take in with my partner on the phone while searching some tasks and lists on my mobile phone too.

✓ Uh, it allows me to keep my data in my notebook every day, and for some reason, it's hard for me to communicate with my partner on the phone while searching for tasks and lists on my mobile phone too.

'It's allow' should be 'it allows' to agree with singular subject. 'Keep my data on my notebook' should be 'in my notebook'. 'Take in with my partner' is incorrect; 'communicate with my partner' is appropriate. Added 'for' before 'tasks' for correct preposition use.