列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が途中で終わっているため、完全な文で答える練習をしましょう。また、時制の一貫性（過去形と現在形の混在）を改善し、より自然な表現を心がけてください。例えば、「I prepare a list beforehand when I plan to buy various things because it helps me buy everything I need. However, for small shopping trips, I usually don't make a list.」のように答えると良いです。

範例: I usually make a list when I plan to buy many items because it helps me remember everything I need. However, if I'm just buying a few things, I don't bother making a list.

建議: 最後の文が不自然で意味が伝わりにくいので、文の構造を見直しましょう。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然になります。例えば、「This method definitely helps me save a lot of time.」のように簡潔に表現すると良いです。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I study because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. For example, by writing down what I need to do, I can manage my time efficiently and avoid forgetting important assignments. This method definitely helps me save a lot of time.

建議: 「making list」ではなく「making lists」と複数形にすること、また「a bit time」ではなく「a bit of time」と正しい表現を使いましょう。さらに、文を分けて理由を明確にすると良いです。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because it takes a bit of time. Also, if they cannot complete the list, they often feel frustrated and uncomfortable.

建議: 「on the paper」より「on paper」が自然です。また、「compared to smart phones」より「compared to using smartphones」の方が適切です。さらに、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。

範例: I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write tasks on paper, I can see what I need to do more easily compared to using smartphones. Also, I really enjoy writing things down on paper.

× When I plan to buy various things, I prepared a list beforehand because it helps me buy everything I needed.

✓ When I plan to buy various things, I prepare a list beforehand because it helps me buy everything I need.

The sentence mixes present tense ('plan') with past tense ('prepared', 'needed'). To maintain consistency, use present tense 'prepare' and 'need' since the action is habitual or general.

× But when I go to shop just for tiny.

✓ But when I go shopping just for small things.

The phrase 'go to shop just for tiny' is incomplete and unclear. 'Go shopping' is the correct verb phrase, and 'tiny' should be replaced with 'small things' to clarify meaning.

× This method definitely saves me a lot of time in reduced.

✓ This method definitely saves me a lot of time in reduction.

The phrase 'in reduced' is incorrect; 'reduced' is a past participle and cannot stand alone here. The noun 'reduction' should be used to express the idea of time being saved.

× I think some people don't like making list because it takes a bit time and when they cannot complete a list they often feel like frustrated and uncomfortable, so they don't like making a list.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it takes a bit of time and when they cannot complete a list they often feel frustrated and uncomfortable, so they don't like making lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring generally. Also, 'a bit time' should be 'a bit of time'. The phrase 'feel like frustrated' is incorrect; it should be 'feel frustrated'.

× I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write the tasks on the paper, I can see what I need to do easily compared to smart phones.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because when I write the tasks on paper, I can see what I need to do more easily compared to smartphones.

The phrase 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper' for general statements. Also, 'easily' should be preceded by 'more' to indicate comparison. 'Smart phones' should be one word 'smartphones'.