列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and detailed. Try to avoid redundancy and add a reason or benefit to enrich your response. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time when I am at the store.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and explain why you don't make lists for work. Adding linking words and details will improve coherence and content.

範例: No, I don't make lists for my work because my tasks are simple and easy to remember, so I don't find it necessary.

建議: Your answer is brief and repetitive. Try to avoid repeating words and provide more specific reasons. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I'm not sure, but I think some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or believe it limits their flexibility.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, so I can easily check or add items whenever I forget something.

× No, my work doesn't require. A list to finish it.

✓ No, my work doesn't require a list to finish it.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure. The phrase 'A list to finish it.' is a fragment and should be connected to the previous sentence to form a complete sentence. Combining them and removing the period after 'require' corrects the structure.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone always with me and if I forgetting thing I can remember it on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me and if I forget something, I can remember it on my phone.

The phrase 'my phone always with me' is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'if I forgetting thing' is incorrect; it should be 'if I forget something' because 'forgetting' is a gerund and not appropriate here, and 'thing' should be plural or replaced with 'something' for clarity.