列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 답변이 다소 길고 중복되는 표현이 있습니다. 더 자연스럽고 간결하게 핵심을 전달하도록 연습하세요. 예를 들어, 주제 문장으로 바로 답변을 시작하고, 필요시 구체적인 이유를 덧붙이는 구조를 사용하세요.

範例: I don't usually make a shopping list unless I need specific items. Although making lists is helpful for organizing, I haven't developed this habit yet.

建議: 답변이 약간 중복되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 시제 일관성을 유지하며, 연결어를 사용해 논리적으로 표현하세요.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my daily tasks at work. It helps me organize my time and manage specific tasks effectively.

建議: 답변에 문법적 오류와 어휘 선택 오류가 있습니다. 명확한 이유를 제시하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because it's not their habit, and it can be stressful to keep track of everything. Also, some have a good memory and prefer not to write things down.

建議: 답변이 다소 길고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 간결하고 명확하게 선호 이유를 말하고, 구체적인 예를 들어 보완하세요.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I like writing things down. It helps me organize my work, studies, and personal tasks better.

× It should be necessary items or specific ones for me to take the time to make a list.

✓ It should be necessary items or specific ones for me to take the time to make a list.

No modal verb error detected in this sentence; 'should be' is used correctly to express necessity.

× But even if it's a good way or manner to organize what I'm going to do in the future or what I need to buy, I don't have this habit yet in my daily routine.

✓ But even if it's a good way or manner to organize what I'm going to do in the future or what I need to buy, I don't have this habit yet in my daily routine.

No definite article error detected; 'a good way or manner' is correct.

× Yes, I definitely make a list for my everyday taxes in my work and for me is the best way to organize my time and the specific task that I have on my calendar.

✓ Yes, I definitely make a list for my everyday tasks at work and for me it is the best way to organize my time and the specific tasks that I have on my calendar.

'Taxes' should be 'tasks' to match the intended meaning; 'in my work' should be 'at work'; 'for me is' should be 'for me it is'; 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'specific' and context.

× So yes, it worked for me.

✓ So yes, it works for me.

The present tense 'works' is appropriate here because the habit is ongoing, not a past event.

× Well I can say that isn't habit and if you don't develop this on time it can be really stressful or not easy to do because it requires time and some people just have a good mining.

✓ Well I can say that it isn't a habit and if you don't develop this on time it can be really stressful or not easy to do because it requires time and some people just have a good memory.

'Isn't habit' needs the article 'a' before 'habit'; 'mining' is a typo and should be 'memory'.

× Can't remember everything well without writing it down.

✓ They can't remember everything well without writing it down.

The sentence lacks a subject pronoun; adding 'They' clarifies the subject.

× I'm a really traditional person so definitely paper and I have a good habit to write it down everything that requires my attention and do part on my daily life routine.

✓ I'm a really traditional person so definitely paper and I have a good habit of writing down everything that requires my attention and doing my part in my daily life routine.

'A good habit to write it down everything' is incorrect; it should be 'a good habit of writing down everything'; 'do part' should be 'doing my part'.

× This include my job, my students and my personal.

✓ This includes my job, my students, and my personal life.

'Include' should be 'includes' to agree with singular subject 'This'; 'personal' is incomplete and should be 'personal life'.