列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Uh, no. Actually, I don't often make a list when I go shopping because I can remember what I need to buy and because I want to buy discounts for the items I need to buy.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Umm, yes, umm, from working, I often make a list on my phone. Umm, you know, my phone is umm, is always be with me and I'm gonna make a making a list. I can prioritize the task, uh, which is important for me to do first.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Umm from my perspective, I, I think that umm when people make a list, umm, they might feel strict and umm annoying. Umm also they think that they can remember in their mind, so they don't want to make a list.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I think I love making a list on my phone and you know my phone is always be with me and I can change on the list if I want. And I also sent Denise to people who need it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 65.0建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có sự lặp lại không cần thiết, ví dụ như "because I can remember what I need to buy" và "because I want to buy discounts for the items I need to buy". Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.
範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I can remember what I need, and I like to look for discounts on the spot.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 60.0建議: Bạn sử dụng nhiều từ ngữ lặp lại và tiếng ừ ừ, làm câu trả lời thiếu tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Hãy luyện tập nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
範例: Yes, I often make a list on my phone because it's always with me. This helps me prioritize important tasks and stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 55.0建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều tiếng ừ và lặp từ, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp lại và thêm các liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.
範例: From my perspective, some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and annoying. Also, they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 50.0建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không rõ nghĩa, ví dụ "I also sent Denise to people" không hợp lý. Bạn nên luyện tập cấu trúc câu đúng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và nói rõ ý hơn.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, and I can easily edit the list. Also, I can share it with others if needed.
文法
× I'm gonna make a making a list.
✓ I'm gonna make a list.
The phrase 'make a making a list' is incorrect because 'making' is unnecessarily repeated and misused. The correct form is 'make a list' where 'make' is the verb and 'list' is the object. Avoid repeating the verb in its -ing form after 'make'. This improves sentence clarity and grammatical correctness.
× my phone is umm, is always be with me
✓ my phone is always with me
The phrase 'is always be with me' is incorrect because it combines two verbs 'is' and 'be' unnecessarily. The correct form is 'is always with me' which uses the verb 'is' with the adverb 'always' and the preposition 'with'. This corrects the verb usage and removes redundancy.
× my phone is always be with me
✓ my phone is always with me
The phrase 'is always be with me' is incorrect because it combines two verbs 'is' and 'be' unnecessarily. The correct form is 'is always with me' which uses the verb 'is' with the adverb 'always' and the preposition 'with'. This corrects the verb usage and removes redundancy.
× I think I love making a list on my phone and you know my phone is always be with me
✓ I think I love making a list on my phone and you know my phone is always with me
The phrase 'is always be with me' is incorrect because it combines two verbs 'is' and 'be' unnecessarily. The correct form is 'is always with me' which uses the verb 'is' with the adverb 'always' and the preposition 'with'. This corrects the verb usage and removes redundancy.
× I can change on the list if I want.
✓ I can change the list if I want.
The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used after 'change'. The verb 'change' here should be directly followed by the object 'the list' without a preposition. Removing 'on' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.
× And I also sent Denise to people who need it.
✓ And I also send it to people who need it.
The word 'Denise' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'the list' or 'it'. Also, 'sent' is past tense but the context suggests present tense 'send'. The pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to the list. Correcting these makes the sentence clear and grammatically correct.
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