列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you should avoid tense inconsistency and redundancy. For example, use present tense consistently ('helps' instead of 'helped') and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organised. By doing this, I can easily find everything I need and avoid forgetting important items. Moreover, it saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

建議: Your answer needs improvement in grammar and clarity. Avoid repeating words ('easily easily') and complete your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain why making lists helps you. Also, try to provide more specific details.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I have a lot of work because organizing tasks is very important. By doing this, I can complete my work more easily and avoid feeling stressed. Therefore, making lists really helps me stay focused and calm.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid using negative or judgmental words like 'lazy'. Instead, explain reasons clearly and politely. Also, complete your sentences and provide examples or reasons to support your answer.

範例: Some people may not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility or creativity.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use complete sentences and explain your preference clearly with reasons. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas.

範例: Honestly, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often forget paper lists at home. Using my phone ensures that I always have my list with me, which is very convenient.

× It also helped me save time and prevents me from buying unnecessary thing.

✓ It also helps me save time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency with 'prevents'.

× Yes, I usually make list when I work a lot and it does work because organizing things is very important.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I work a lot and it does work because organizing things is very important.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a' before it.

× By organizing things we easily easily complete our task and don't have to panic much.

✓ By organizing things, we easily complete our tasks and don't have to panic much.

The phrase 'our task' should be plural 'our tasks' to match the plural subject 'things'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase for clarity.

× So I make.

✓ So I make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'a list' which is necessary to complete the meaning.

× The people who are very lazy and they don't want to stay organized, they don't make list because if uh.

✓ People who are very lazy and don't want to stay organized don't make lists because...

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make lists' to be grammatically correct. Also, 'The people' can be simplified to 'People' for naturalness.

× Honestly, I prefer to making list on my phone because sometimes we forget the list.

✓ Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone because sometimes we forget the list.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context.