列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answerをもっと自然で効果的にし、冗長な表現を避けましょう。例えば、"I make a shopping list on my phone before I go to the mall or convenience store to remember what I need to buy."のように、簡潔で明確な文を心がけてください。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list on my phone before going to the mall or convenience store to remember the food and household items I need to buy.

建議: 答えが不明瞭で文法的に不完全です。質問に直接答え、具体的な例を簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。例えば、"Yes, I make lists for my work. I write down my ideas and plans in a notebook and sometimes take pictures to help me remember."のように。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work. I write down my ideas and plans in a notebook and sometimes take pictures to help me remember.

建議: 質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。例えば、"Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally."のように、理由を具体的に述べましょう。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.

建議: 答えをもっと明確にし、理由を簡潔に述べましょう。例えば、"I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I always have my phone with me."のように表現してください。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to use and I always have my phone with me.

× I have a, a mini, uh, buying the food and, or things, uh, House of things.

✓ I have a mini list for buying food and other household items.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'buying' as a noun and 'things' ambiguously. 'Mini list' is singular and should be followed by a clear description. 'House of things' is unclear and should be replaced with 'household items' to correctly express plural items related to the house.

× I list in my phone for remember.

✓ I list it in my phone to remember.

The preposition 'in' is correct for 'list in my phone', but 'for remember' is incorrect. The correct infinitive form is 'to remember' to express purpose.

× I make the list for my work.

✓ I make lists for my work.

If the student makes lists regularly, the plural 'lists' is more appropriate. If referring to a single list, 'the list' is acceptable, but context suggests multiple lists.

× do you have do you have a plan, plan some of materials ideas to my down, down, down my book and I, I take the picture for.

✓ Do you have a plan? I write down some material ideas in my book and take a picture of them.

The original sentence has repeated phrases and incorrect pronoun use. 'To my down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down'. Also, 'take the picture for' is incomplete; it should be 'take a picture of them'.

× People make the, uh, many people make the, uh, the list, uh, because uh, the it's help to reminder, remind to do all the things or items what they need.

✓ Many people make lists because they help remind them to do all the things or get the items they need.

The sentence has redundant phrases and incorrect conjunctions. 'The it's help to reminder' is incorrect; it should be 'they help remind'. Also, 'what they need' is better expressed as 'the items they need'.

× If, like, if for example, about the work, it's a bit, it's a very hot, it's very, uh, so many materials.

✓ For example, at work, there are many materials to handle, which can be overwhelming.

The original sentence uses 'hot' incorrectly to describe workload. 'So many materials' is better expressed as 'many materials to handle'. The sentence structure is unclear and needs rephrasing.

× I prepare me glass and in my phone because, uh, it's uh, because the it's easy to, to use and easy to, to say in the last because uh, and the phone is uh, always, uh, uh, foot in my hand.

✓ I prepare my list on paper and in my phone because it's easy to use and always with me.

'Prepare me glass' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare my list on paper'. 'Say in the last' is unclear and likely means 'save the list'. 'Foot in my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'always with me' or 'always in my hand'.