列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct prepositions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of 'helps to me to stick my budget,' say 'helps me stick to my budget.' Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas logically.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stick to my budget and shop more efficiently. For example, having a list allows me to buy specific products at certain stores without overspending. This approach also saves time since I don't have to visit multiple stores repeatedly.

建議: Your response is relevant but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions, such as 'list of works' and 'moving to another stores on other things.' To improve, use correct collocations like 'to-do list' and clarify your points with better linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific about how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I always prepare a to-do list for my work, and it usually helps me stay focused. Having a list means I can concentrate on my tasks without getting distracted by other things. Additionally, it saves me time by organizing my priorities effectively.

建議: Your answer attempts to explain reasons but is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Phrases like 'under budget' and 'moving to that expansion one' are confusing. To improve, use clearer vocabulary and sentence structures. Explain ideas logically with linking words such as 'because' and 'for example.'

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it frustrating to stick to a budget. For example, if they want to buy an expensive item, a list might force them to choose cheaper alternatives, which can be disappointing.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has awkward phrasing and grammatical errors, such as 'the reason behind is that because' and 'there is a chances.' To improve, use simpler and more natural expressions. Also, organize your ideas clearly with linking words like 'because' and 'also.'

範例: I usually make my lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's easier to check my list on the phone, and I don't have to worry about losing a paper list while shopping.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps to me to stick my budget and shop my more efficiency.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me stick to my budget and shop more efficiently.

The phrase 'helps to me to stick' is incorrect; 'helps me stick to' is the correct form. Also, 'shop my more efficiency' is incorrect; it should be 'shop more efficiently' because 'efficiently' is the adverb modifying the verb 'shop'.

× For example, having a list means that I can purchase that type of products at that stores only under a limited budget.

✓ For example, having a list means that I can purchase that type of product at those stores only under a limited budget.

The phrase 'type of products' should be 'type of product' because 'type' is singular and should be followed by a singular noun. Also, 'that stores' should be 'those stores' to match plural form and demonstrative pronoun agreement.

× In addition to it is a very time effective rather than going to another stores again and again.

✓ In addition, it is very time-effective rather than going to other stores again and again.

The phrase 'In addition to it' is incorrect; 'In addition' is the correct phrase. Also, 'time effective' should be hyphenated as 'time-effective' when used as an adjective. 'Another stores' is incorrect; 'other stores' is correct because 'stores' is plural.

× Yes, I always prepare the list of works which are necessary for me.

✓ Yes, I always prepare a list of tasks which are necessary for me.

The phrase 'list of works' is incorrect; 'work' is uncountable or 'tasks' is more appropriate here. Using 'tasks' fits better as countable items in a list.

× The reason behind it that's having at least means that I can stay focus on my work rather than moving to another stores on other things.

✓ The reason behind it is that having a list means I can stay focused on my work rather than moving to other stores for other things.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'That's having at least' is incorrect; it should be 'is that having a list'. 'Stay focus' should be 'stay focused'. 'Another stores' should be 'other stores'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× In addition to this, it saves my time as well.

✓ In addition to this, it saves me time as well.

The phrase 'saves my time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'saves me time'.

× There are many reasons behind by people do not like to make a list.

✓ There are many reasons why people do not like to make a list.

The phrase 'reasons behind by' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'reasons why'.

× First and foremost reason they think that it makes them frustrated and under budget.

✓ The first and foremost reason is that they think it makes them frustrated and restricts their budget.

The original sentence lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'The first and foremost reason is that' corrects the sentence structure. Also, 'under budget' is unclear; 'restricts their budget' clarifies the meaning.

× Sometimes people have to buy a particular product which is very expensive but having a budget made that they have to focus on other products rather than moving to that expansion one.

✓ Sometimes people have to buy a particular product which is very expensive, but having a budget means they have to focus on other products rather than buying that expensive one.

The phrase 'having a budget made that' is incorrect; 'having a budget means that' is correct. 'Moving to that expansion one' is unclear; 'buying that expensive one' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I usually prepare a list of work on my phone.

✓ I usually prepare a list of work tasks on my phone.

'List of work' is vague; 'list of work tasks' clarifies the meaning and is more natural.

× The reason behind is that because I always carry phone in my pocket.

✓ The reason is that I always carry my phone in my pocket.

'The reason behind is that because' is redundant; 'The reason is that' suffices. Also, 'carry phone' should be 'carry my phone'.

× In addition to this, it is very easy for me to see at least sometimes there is a chances of losing a paper while going to somewhere for the shopping.

✓ In addition to this, it is very easy for me to see, and at least sometimes there is a chance of losing paper while going somewhere for shopping.

'A chances' should be 'a chance'. 'Going to somewhere' is incorrect; 'going somewhere' is correct. 'For the shopping' should be 'for shopping'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Phone is easy to carry and easy to check it out.

✓ The phone is easy to carry and easy to check.

'Phone' needs the definite article 'The'. Also, 'check it out' is informal and redundant here; 'check' suffices.