列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, aim to be more concise and clear by removing redundancy, for example, 'save my time and don't miss anything' can be combined. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything. However, if I forget to make a list, I often have to return to the store to buy missing items.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using linking words to connect ideas and by correcting minor grammar issues. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps your work.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every day, especially when I work in a genetics lab. Since we have different experiments for each test, we break down the main protocol into simple tasks, which helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建議: Avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to provide more specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they are too busy or prefer to rely on their strong memory to keep everything in mind. For instance, they may find lists time-consuming or unnecessary.

建議: Try to complete your answer fully and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, correct grammar mistakes and be specific about when you use paper or phone for lists.

範例: It depends on the situation. In the lab, since we work with chemicals, we are usually not allowed to use phones, so I write notes on sticky notes and place them in front of me. However, outside the lab, I prefer to use my phone to make lists because it's more convenient.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me, uh, save my time and and don't miss anything.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me, uh, save time and not miss anything.

The phrase 'save my time' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is uncountable and does not require a possessive pronoun. Also, 'and don't miss anything' lacks a subject and should be rephrased to 'and not miss anything' to maintain parallel structure.

× And whenever I forget to uh, create a list, most of the time, umm, I should go to grocery.

✓ And whenever I forget to, uh, create a list, most of the time, umm, I have to go to the grocery store.

The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly used here; 'have to' better expresses obligation. Also, 'go to grocery' is missing the article 'the' and the noun 'store' to be grammatically correct.

× Every day I have A to do list, especially when I work in genetic lab and we have different experiments for each test.

✓ Every day I have a to-do list, especially when I work in a genetic lab and we have different experiments for each test.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. 'Genetic lab' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' as it is a compound noun.

× Uh, maybe they're busy to make a list, or maybe they have a strong, uh, may have a strong memory to, uh, to stay everything in their mind, to keep everything in their mind.

✓ Uh, maybe they're too busy to make a list, or maybe they have a strong, uh, may have a strong memory to, uh, keep everything in their mind.

The phrase 'busy to make' is incorrect; it should be 'too busy to make'. Also, 'stay everything in their mind' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'keep' when referring to retaining information in the mind.

× It depends on the situation in the lab, because we work with chemical, usually we are not allowed to use our phones and usually I, umm, write my notes uh, down on the sticky notes and just stick it to different place in front of myself.

✓ It depends on the situation in the lab, because we work with chemicals, usually we are not allowed to use our phones and usually I, umm, write my notes, uh, down on sticky notes and just stick them to different places in front of me.

'Chemical' should be plural 'chemicals' as it refers to substances in general. 'Sticky notes' is plural and does not need 'the'. 'Stick it to different place' is incorrect; it should be 'stick them to different places'. Also, 'in front of myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'me' here.