列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and avoid forgetting items.

建議: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because planning daily tasks helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.

建議: Your answer is unclear due to many hesitations and incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe they can remember their tasks without writing them down, but I think planning is important for everyone.

建議: Your answer is confusing and incomplete. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reason using simple and correct sentences.

範例: I prefer to make my lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better, and I can easily carry the list with me.

× Actually yes Sir, I always make a list when I shop because I usually for get the shopping list and I should to list them to remember what I should shop.

✓ Actually yes Sir, I always make a list when I shop because I usually forget the shopping list and I should list them to remember what I should shop.

The phrase 'for get' is incorrect; the correct form is 'forget' which is the base verb. Also, 'should to list' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'should' are followed by the base verb without 'to'. So, 'should list' is correct.

× Actually yes Sir, I always make a list when I shop because I usually for get the shopping list and I should to list them to remember what I should shop.

✓ Actually yes Sir, I always make a list when I shop because I usually forget the shopping list and I should list them to remember what I should buy.

The phrase 'what I should shop' is incorrect; the verb 'shop' is usually intransitive and does not take a direct object. The correct verb here is 'buy' to indicate purchasing items.

× Actually, yes, uh, because I think that and make a plan for, uh, routine and daily works is very important.

✓ Actually, yes, uh, because I think that making a plan for routine and daily work is very important.

The original sentence has a missing gerund form after 'think that' and incorrect plural 'works'. The verb 'make' should be in gerund form 'making' to act as the object of 'think that'. Also, 'work' as uncountable noun is better than 'works' here.

× And, uh, we have to organize, uh, our task when I worked and this is, uh, and this is very important and, uh, uh, with, uh, plan.

✓ And, uh, we have to organize our tasks when we work and this is very important with a plan.

The sentence incorrectly switches pronouns from 'we' to 'I' and uses past tense 'worked' inconsistently. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'we'. The phrase 'with, uh, plan' needs an article 'a' before 'plan'.

× I think the, the people who, uh, make, uh, don't make a list, uh, they, uh, think that, uh, they should, uh, memorize their task and, uh, but I think that this is not correct and all the people should have, uh, planning and, uh.

✓ I think the people who don't make a list think that they should memorize their tasks, but I think that this is not correct and all people should have planning.

The sentence has redundant words and awkward phrasing. 'Make, uh, don't make' is confusing; it should be 'who don't make'. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'they'. The phrase 'all the people' can be simplified to 'all people'. Also, 'have planning' is acceptable but could be improved to 'have a plan'.

× I actually refer to prepare my list on the paper because when I write it down on the paper, it's that his film feed me better and I can't I can't bring them everywhere and.

✓ I actually prefer to prepare my list on paper because when I write it down on paper, it helps me better and I can't bring it everywhere.

The phrase 'refer to prepare' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'prefer to prepare'. 'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as a general medium. 'It's that his film feed me better' is unclear and likely a mishearing; corrected to 'it helps me better'. 'I can't I can't bring them everywhere' is redundant and 'them' should be 'it' referring to the list.