列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain why making a list is helpful, and provide specific reasons.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer is confusing and lacks coherence. Focus on answering the question directly with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of how making lists helps your work or shopping.

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work tasks, which helps me stay organized. For example, I prepare a list every Friday to plan my shopping, making the process more efficient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons. Use linking words to explain why some people avoid making lists, and be specific about their reasons.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and complicated. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory rather than writing things down.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains irrelevant information. Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why using your phone is convenient with specific reasons. Avoid unrelated phrases.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me and easy to update. For instance, I can quickly add items while cooking or shopping, which makes it very convenient.

× Yes, it's essential to guide me get the need thing.

✓ Yes, it's essential to guide me in getting the needed things.

The verb 'guide' should be followed by the preposition 'in' and the gerund form 'getting' to indicate the action. Also, 'need thing' is incorrect; it should be 'needed things' to correctly express the objects required.

× Uh, you know, it's convenient, convenient and effective.

✓ Uh, you know, it's convenient and effective.

The word 'convenient' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the repetition improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I often make a list uh, in addition, I make this for my Friday shopping every day can make a list, uh, it's convenient and uh.

✓ Yes, I often make a list. In addition, I make this for my Friday shopping. Every day, I can make a list; it's convenient.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. Breaking it into clear sentences improves readability and grammatical correctness.

× I think people think make list is a complex complex in each need to stand a lot of time and they have not.

✓ I think people think making a list is complex and requires a lot of time, so they do not do it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Using 'making a list' as a gerund phrase and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects grammar.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because you know, from the every phone, everyone can breathe their phone anytime.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, you know, everyone can use their phone anytime.

The phrase 'from the every phone' is incorrect and unclear. Also, 'breathe their phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use their phone'. The correction uses proper prepositions and vocabulary.

× Uh, so I prefer to make about dinner.

✓ Uh, so I prefer to make a list about dinner.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'a list' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence structure.