列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构有些重复且不够自然。建议简化句子，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的连接词。

範例: I rarely make a shopping list, but before entering the mall, I usually think about the essential items I need to buy.

建議: 回答内容清晰，但句子较长且有些重复。建议使用更简洁的表达，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I often make lists for work because they help me remember my tasks for the day or week, ensuring I complete everything on time.

建議: 回答较简单，缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加原因和例子，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

範例: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to keep their tasks in mind, allowing them to complete each one step by step efficiently.

建議: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，使用连接词提高流畅度。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I carry it everywhere, so I can easily check my list anytime, which helps me avoid forgetting tasks.

× I often think of what I need to buy and what are the things that I must buy.

✓ I often think of what I need to buy and what things I must buy.

句子中“what are the things”结构不符合英语语法，正确表达应为“what things”，避免主谓不一致。简而言之，疑问词后不应直接跟系动词。

× Making a list can help me remember what I need to do in this week or this day so that I could finish all the things that I need to do.

✓ Making a list can help me remember what I need to do this week or today so that I can finish all the things that I need to do.

此处表达的是现在或将来可能发生的事情，应该用情态动词“can”表示能力或可能性，而“could”通常表示过去或假设，使用不当。

× Maybe they know what they need to do very well. They have a list in their minds so that they could do the things 1 by 1 and complete it on time.

✓ Maybe they know what they need to do very well. They have a list in their minds so that they can do the things one by one and complete them on time.

“things”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。此外，“1 by 1”应写为“one by one”，更符合书面表达。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is the thing that I take on my pocket every day so that I could take out my phone and check my list anytime anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is the thing that I carry in my pocket every day so that I can take out my phone and check my list anytime, anywhere.

“phone”前缺少定冠词“the”，表示特指。动词“take on my pocket”应改为“carry in my pocket”，更符合习惯用法。情态动词“could”应改为“can”，表示能力或可能性。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is the thing that I take on my pocket every day so that I could take out my phone and check my list anytime anywhere.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is the thing that I carry in my pocket every day so that I can take out my phone and check my list anytime, anywhere.

介词“on my pocket”错误，正确用法是“in my pocket”，表示物品放在口袋里。