列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答总体清晰，但存在重复和一些语法/用词错误（如“waiters”应为“staff”或“shop assistants”，以及重复短语“where they where they are”）。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答（例如：Yes, I always make a shopping list.）；2) 用一到两句具体支持并用连接词（for example, so, because）保持连贯；3) 避免冗余，注意正确词汇和语法。可在练习中替换不准确词汇并修正句子顺序。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me shop efficiently. For example, when I need a bed and pillows, I check my list and ask the store staff where those items are, so I can go straight to that section.

建議: 回答表达意图明确但存在语法和用词问题（大写不当、短语“compress the thing 1 by 1”不自然）。建议：1) 用清晰的主题句（Yes, I make a to-do list every morning.）；2) 用连词连接细节（for example, then, so）；3) 用更自然的动词短语（work through tasks one by one, tick items off）。练习用正确短语描述步骤并避免直译表达。

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning. For example, I write down the tasks I need to complete, then I work through them one by one and tick them off, which helps me stay organised.

建議: 回答包含观点和反驳，但句子有些笨拙（time consuming, make list 的冠词和形式问题）。建议：1) 先给出原因（Some people find lists time-consuming or restrictive），2) 随后用逻辑连接词说明你的看法（however, in fact）并给出具体好处；3) 注意冠词与词序。

範例: Some people find making lists time-consuming or restrictive. However, in fact, a to-do list can help them prioritise tasks and complete work more efficiently.

建議: 回答明确且有理由，但词汇和表达可以更自然（timesheet 不太合适，the phone will ring when the plan is coming 不够地道）。建议：1) 用更合适的词汇（set reminders, notifications）；2) 用连接词解释好处（so, which means）；3) 用简洁句子避免口语化数字“1 by 1”。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can set reminders and get notifications. This means I can follow my schedule and complete tasks one by one without forgetting anything.

× Yes, I will make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save the time and buy the things more quickly.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time and buy things more quickly.

你使用了“will”表达习惯性或经常发生的动作时不恰当。此处讨论的是经常性的习惯（每次去购物都会做），英文通常用一般现在时表示习惯性动作，所以应改为“I make a list”。另外去掉“the time”和“the things”中的定冠词，英文中谈论泛指的“时间”或“东西”不用“the”。

× For example, if I want to buy a bed and pillows, I'll ask the waiters where they where they are and I can go there.

✓ For example, if I want to buy a bed and pillows, I'll ask the sales assistants where they are and then I can go there.

句中有重复“where they where they are”，属于多余重复。还使用了“waiters”指商店里的人不准确，应使用“sales assistants”或“shop assistants”。在连接两个动作时用“and then”更自然，表示先问再过去。

× Yes I do. I often create A to do list in the morning for example, I plan to finish the work and write them down and I compress the thing 1 by 1 and finally I finish it.

✓ Yes I do. I often create a to-do list in the morning. For example, I plan the tasks, write them down, and complete the tasks one by one until I finish them.

“A to do list”中冠词和词形应为“小写a”和连字符“to-do list”；“the work”不够具体，改为“the tasks”更贴切；“write them down”保留，但原句缺少标点且句子拼接混乱。“compress the thing 1 by 1”是错误用词，应使用“complete/finish the tasks one by one”。最后代词一致性也需调整。

× Because some people think it is time consuming for them to make list, but actually making A to do list can help them finish the work or do things more efficiently.

✓ Because some people think it is time-consuming for them to make a list, but actually making a to-do list can help them finish work or do things more efficiently.

“make list”缺少不定冠词，应为“make a list”。“A to do list”大小写和连字符不正确，应为“a to-do list”。“time-consuming”为复合形容词需连字符。“the work”在泛指时去掉“the”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can set up a timesheet for my plan.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can set up a timetable or reminder for my plan.

“timesheet”通常指工作时长记录，不是用于计划提醒，应使用“timetable”或“reminder”。时态本句为一般现在时，用法正确，只需改词以符合语境。

× The phone will ring when the plan is coming so I can do the thing 1 by 1.

✓ The phone will ring when the reminder goes off so I can do the tasks one by one.

原句“the plan is coming”不自然，用“when the reminder goes off”更贴切。“the thing 1 by 1”也不地道，应为“tasks one by one”。保留“will ring”表示将来的动作是可以的，但更自然的是用具体名词“reminder”。