列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较自然但有语法与表达不准确之处，句子较长且有重复信息。建议：1) 用一到两句直接作主题句（肯定回答并给出原因）；2) 修正时态与单复数错误（forgot → forget；do them a favor → do them a favor 不自然，可改成 help them）；3) 精简叙述并用连接词连接例子（e.g. because, so）。练习时注意发音与流畅度。

範例: Yes, I do. I always make a shopping list because I’m likely to forget things otherwise. For example, once my mother asked me to buy milk, but I forgot because I hadn’t written it down.

建議: 回答结构基本合格，但存在语法错误和部分重复，且句子可更连贯。建议：1) 把主题句与效果句分开，使用连接词如 therefore, which helps；2) 修正语法（when it close → when it’s close / when exams are near；making this list really help → helps）；3) 提供更具体细节（如每天的任务例子）。

範例: Yes, I do. I make a study plan when exams are near, and I put a clear list on my desk. This helps me decide what tasks to do each day, for example reviewing chapters in the morning and doing practice tests in the evening, which improves my study efficiency.

建議: 回答含混且存在措辞不当与冗余。建议：1) 用更自然的表达给出两个清晰原因；2) 避免重复（don’t need to make a list / push themselves）；3) 使用连接词如 because, for instance, or so to make logic clear；4) 用更地道的词汇（independence ability → self-discipline or good memory）。

範例: Some people may think lists are unnecessary because they have good memory or strong self-discipline. For instance, people who prefer flexibility might find lists too restrictive, so they rely on habit or routine instead.

建議: 回答清楚但有语法错误和表达不顺。建议：1) 先给出偏好并说明原因；2) 修正不完整句与词序（if I use it on my maybe → if I use my phone, I might open other apps）；3) 精简并用连接词（however, because）；4) 可补充具体功能对比（e.g. portability, reminders）。

範例: I prefer paper lists because I can use colored pens and highlight urgent tasks. However, I sometimes use my phone for reminders, but I avoid it when I need focus because notifications and other apps can be distracting.

× Yes I do, I always make a list, especially my parents ask me to do them a favor.

✓ Yes I do. I always make a list, especially when my parents ask me to do them a favor.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误。原句缺少连接词，导致“especially my parents ask me to do them a favor”结构不通。应在especially后加when引导时间状语从句，或重写为“especially if/when my parents ask me to ask a favor of me”。另外“do them a favor”用法不自然，通常说“do me a favor”或“ask me to do them a favor”应改为“ask me to do them a favor”也不太通顺，建议改为“ask me to do them a favor”以外更自然的表达。建议改为："especially when my parents ask me to do a favor for them."

× If I don't write it down I will probably forgot something.

✓ If I don't write it down, I will probably forget something.

问题类型：27 主谓一致/动词形式错误。句中“forgot”为过去式，但条件句中主句用将来时，应使用动词原形或现在时形式的动词“forget”。建议在条件句和主句之间加逗号以清晰分句。

× Once my mom asked me to buy a bottle of milk and I forgot it.

✓ Once my mom asked me to buy a bottle of milk and I forgot it.

问题类型：5 过去时问题。句子时态本身为过去时（asked, forgot），与上下文一致。仅需注意前后句衔接无误，所以保留原句。注：若要更自然可改为“and I forgot to buy it.” 但这不属于必须更正的语法类型。

× I always make a study plan especially when it close to my final exam.

✓ I always make a study plan, especially when it is close to my final exam.

问题类型：6 现在时问题/主谓一致。原句“when it close”缺少be动词“is”以匹配主语it，导致时态和主谓不一致。应使用“is close”或更自然的“is close to my final exams”。建议在when从句中加入“is”。

× I will make a clear learning list and put it on my table.

✓ I will make a clear study list and put it on my desk.

问题类型：27 词语搭配/主谓一致问题。原句“learning list”较少用，建议用“study list”；“table”虽非严格语法错误，但“desk”更符合学习场景。此处为风格改进而非严格语法错误，但为了自然表达建议替换。

× It greatly helps me to clearly know what I should do each day and making this list really help me to raise my study efficiency.

✓ It greatly helps me to clearly know what I should do each day, and making this list really helps me to raise my study efficiency.

问题类型：6 现在时问题/主谓一致。前半句时态OK，但后半句“making this list really help me”中“help”应与主语“making this list”保持单数形式，使用“helps”。另外两个并列分句之间加逗号更清晰。

× Maybe they suggest that it is not necessary to make a list.

✓ Maybe they think that it is not necessary to make a list.

问题类型：26 句子结构/词汇使用错误（不在列表的严格类型内）。原句用“suggest”不符合语境，应使用“think”或“believe”。虽然不在指定更正类型内，但属于结构自然性改进。此处标注为句子结构问题。说明（中文）：“suggest”通常表示提出建议，而非表达观点。建议用“think/believe”。

× For example, maybe they have strong sense of independence ability and they can finish something in a high attention and efficiency, so they don't need to make a list to push themselves.

✓ For example, maybe they have a strong sense of independence and can finish tasks with high concentration and efficiency, so they don't need to make a list to push themselves.

问题类型：13 形容词/副词使用错误。原句“independence ability”搭配错误，应为“a strong sense of independence”；“in a high attention and efficiency”结构不正确，应改为“with high concentration and efficiency”或“with great focus and efficiency”。对非母语表达进行词汇和搭配修正，使语法正确且自然。中文解释：搭配错误和词性使用不当。建议背诵常用搭配如“a strong sense of independence”，“with high concentration”。

× For me, I prefer to make a list on paper since I can write it down with different color of pens and highlight the important ones that I have to finish that day.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on paper since I can write it down with different colored pens and highlight the important ones that I have to finish that day.

问题类型：11 介词/词形使用错误。原句“different color of pens”应为“different colored pens”或“pens of different colors”。这里需要形容词形式“colored”。中文解释：颜色作定语时应使用形容词形式或‘of’结构。建议记住“different colored pens”或“pens of different colors”。

× But if I use it on my maybe I will not open that apps entertainment content because I will be attracted by other interesting entertainment apps.

✓ But if I use it on my phone, I might open entertainment apps instead because I will be attracted by other interesting apps.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误与词形错误。原句“if I use it on my maybe I will not open that apps entertainment content”结构混乱，缺少名词“phone”，并且“that apps entertainment content”错误且冗长，且逻辑“not open... because I will be attracted”自相矛盾。改为“might open entertainment apps instead”更符合本意。中文解释：句子缺主语/宾语，词序和逻辑不通。建议写句子前先理清主从关系，使用简单结构（If + condition, result）。