列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one or two concise reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid redundancy. For example, use: “I don’t usually make shopping lists because I prefer to rely on memory.” Then add a supporting detail: “However, for big shops I sometimes write things down to avoid forgetting.”

範例: I don’t usually make shopping lists because I prefer to rely on my memory. However, if I need to buy many items or special ingredients, I’ll write a list on my phone so I don’t forget anything.

建議: Good clear answer but fix grammar (subject–verb agreement, articles) and use linking words for coherence. Be specific about how lists help and give a short example of when they helped. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for work because they help me prioritise tasks and stay organised. I usually use a note app on my phone, which reminds me of deadlines. For example, last week my list helped me finish three important reports on time.

建議: Start with a clear opinion sentence and use correct grammar and linking words. Give one or two specific reasons and an example to make your answer convincing. Avoid awkward phrases like “prepare important task on particular time.”

範例: I think some people avoid lists because they trust their memory and prefer flexibility. For instance, people who work in creative jobs may find lists restrictive and believe they can remember tasks without writing them down.

建議: Give a concise direct answer, fix grammar and repetition, and provide a brief specific reason with an example. Use linking words like “because” and “for example.” Avoid vague phrasing such as “in struggle.”

範例: I prefer using my phone for lists because it is convenient and sends reminders. For example, I set notifications for grocery items and deadlines, which helps me avoid forgetting important tasks.

× It is not my hobby to make list while shopping.

✓ It is not my hobby to make a list while shopping.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' is required before the singular countable noun 'list.' Without the article the noun phrase is ungrammatical. Suggestion: say 'a list' or 'lists' if plural meaning is intended.

× I usually like to remember things whenever I go outside for buy something.

✓ I usually like to remember things whenever I go outside to buy something.

The infinitive of purpose requires 'to' before the verb 'buy.' The original used 'for buy' which is incorrect. Also 'go outside to buy' is the correct prepositional/infinitive structure. Suggestion: use 'to buy' after verbs of movement to indicate purpose.

× It is much comfortable for me while shopping instead of making a list for important work.

✓ It is much more comfortable for me while shopping than making a list for important tasks.

'Comfortable' is an adjective and should be modified by 'more' for comparative form, not 'much comfortable.' Also compare two activities using 'than.' 'Important work' is better as plural 'important tasks' in this context. Suggestion: use comparative structures 'more comfortable than' and correct noun number.

× Definitely, I prefer to make a list for my work. It make my work easier and convenient.

✓ Definitely, I prefer to make a list for my work. It makes my work easier and more convenient.

In present simple third person singular the verb needs an -s: 'make' should be 'makes.' Also 'convenient' should be preceded by 'more' to compare, or 'and convenient' can be 'and convenient' but 'more convenient' matches 'easier.' Suggestion: add -s for third person and use parallel comparative forms.

× Moreover, I give preference to use my mobile phone for making list.

✓ Moreover, I prefer to use my mobile phone to make lists.

'Give preference to use' is awkward; native phrasing is 'prefer to.' Use 'to make' rather than 'for making' here. Also 'list' should be plural 'lists' or 'a list' depending on meaning. Suggestion: say 'I prefer to use my mobile phone to make lists.'

× It works a lot to make my work easier.

✓ It helps a lot to make my work easier.

'Works' is awkward collocation here; native speakers say 'helps' or 'is helpful.' The infinitive clause 'to make my work easier' is fine. Suggestion: use 'helps a lot' or 'is very helpful.'

× I think some people don't like to make lists because they feel that their mind are enough to prepare important task on particular time.

✓ I think some people don't like to make lists because they feel that their minds are enough to handle important tasks at the right time.

Pronoun agreement: 'their mind' should be 'their minds' (plural). 'Are' agrees with plural 'minds.' 'Prepare' is awkward; 'handle' or 'manage' is better. 'Important task' should be plural 'important tasks.' 'On particular time' is incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'at the right time' or 'at the appropriate time.' Suggestion: ensure plural agreement and correct prepositions.

× That is why they just like to memorize thing at task.

✓ That is why they just like to memorize things for a task.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' when speaking generally. 'At task' is incorrect; use 'for a task' or 'for tasks.' Suggestion: use plural nouns when generalizing and choose correct preposition 'for.'

× I prefer my phone for making lists because in this way I can easily remember my phone always remembering me whenever I am in struggle or I have to remember something important.

✓ I prefer my phone for making lists because this way my phone can always remind me whenever I am struggling or need to remember something important.

Awkward and incorrect phrasing: 'remember my phone always remembering me' is incorrect. Use 'my phone can remind me.' 'In struggle' should be 'struggling.' 'I have to remember' can be simplified to 'need to remember.' Also definite/possessive usage adjusted. Suggestion: use active verb 'remind' and correct gerund/adjective forms.

× So I think that this kind of work are much convenient for us.

✓ So I think that this kind of work is much more convenient for us.

The subject 'this kind of work' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are.' Also use comparative 'much more convenient' rather than 'much convenient.' Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject number and use correct comparative form.