列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but reduce filler words (uh), tighten sentence structure and avoid vague phrasing like "very obvious" and "which I thought I would need in the future." Use one strong topic sentence and one specific supporting detail. Also vary vocabulary slightly (e.g., "shopping list" instead of repeating "list").

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organised and avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, last week I wrote down ingredients for a recipe and managed to buy everything in one trip, saving time and money.

建議: Good direct response but avoid hesitations and repeated words (uh). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific example of how lists help you (e.g., prioritisation, deadlines, tracking progress). Be concise and avoid vague claims like "helped me a lot to improve" without stating what improved.

範例: Yes, I make a daily work list, and it works well. For instance, when I list my English study tasks and prioritise them, I track progress more easily and complete my weekly goals on time.

建議: The idea is understandable but the answer is long-winded and has hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence explaining one main reason, then briefly support it with a specific consequence. Remove repetitions and improve grammar (e.g., "feel pressured" and "if tasks aren't finished on time").

範例: Some people avoid lists because seeing unfinished tasks can make them feel pressured. For example, a person might feel stressed every time they look at a growing to‑do list and prefer a more flexible approach.

建議: Clear preference and reasonable explanation. Improve by using smoother phrasing and one concrete advantage (e.g., reminders, editing easily) and avoid casual phrases like "you have to use it everywhere in the market." Keep it concise and natural.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me and I can easily edit items or set reminders. For instance, I use a notes app to update my grocery list while shopping, which saves time.

× ...and I can get everything which I wanted and which I thought I would need in the future.

✓ ...and I can get everything that I want and that I think I will need in the future.

The student used past tense verbs 'wanted' and 'thought' while speaking about a habitual or future intention. Use present simple/ future forms to match the meaning: 'want' (present) and 'think' with 'will' for future need. Also replace 'which' with 'that' for restrictive clauses in spoken English. Suggestions: Use present tense for general truths or habits and use 'will' for future intentions. Use 'that' for essential clauses.

× ...the tasks which I have to complete, I make a list for that and it really helped me a lot to improve.

✓ ...the tasks which I have to complete, I make a list for them and it has really helped me a lot to improve.

The clause 'it really helped me' uses simple past 'helped' but the speaker is describing an ongoing result of a habitual action; present perfect 'has helped' is more appropriate. Also 'make a list for that' is unnatural; use 'for them' to refer to tasks. Suggestions: Use present perfect to link past actions to present results and ensure pronouns agree with plural 'tasks'.

× ...some people don't like making lists because they think if they make note of what they have to do and whenever they uh, see that list and they feel more pressurized if the work is not completed till the time up to the time it has been.

✓ ...some people don't like making lists because they think if they note what they have to do and later see that list they feel more pressured if the work is not completed on time.

Multiple issues: 'make note of' is better as 'note' or 'make a note of'; tense/use of 'whenever' and 'and they' is redundant. 'Pressurized' is Indian English but 'pressured' is more natural. The phrase 'till the time up to the time it has been' is ungrammatical; replace with 'on time'. Suggestions: Simplify sentence structure, use correct collocations ('make a note of' or 'note', 'feel pressured'), and use 'on time' for deadlines.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because a phone is a gadget that is always with you. You have to use it everywhere in the market.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because a phone is a gadget that is always with you. You can use it anywhere at the market.

'Use it everywhere in the market' is awkward. 'Everywhere' + 'in the market' is redundant. Better: 'anywhere at the market' or simply 'in the market' or 'anywhere' depending on intended meaning. Also 'have to' implies obligation; 'can' is more natural for ability. Suggestions: Choose correct preposition phrases ('in the market', 'at the market', or 'anywhere') and use 'can' for ability rather than 'have to'.

× ...the tasks which I have to complete, I make a list for that and it really helped me a lot to improve.

✓ ...the tasks which I have to complete, I make a list for them and it has really helped me a lot to improve.

The demonstrative 'that' does not correctly refer to plural 'tasks'; use the plural pronoun 'them'. Also corrected tense as noted earlier. Suggestions: Ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents; use 'them' for plural nouns.