列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms and articles (e.g., “when I go to the supermarket”) and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes — I always make a shopping list. For example, I write down all the ingredients I need for the week, so when I go to the supermarket I don’t forget anything and I shop more quickly.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and concrete details. Use correct verb tenses and precise vocabulary (e.g., “I make a list” not “did the lease”; “detail-oriented”; “plan” not “plant”). Limit to two to three sentences and use linking words like “because” or “therefore.”

範例: Yes, I make work lists regularly because they help me stay organized and detail-oriented. For instance, I list daily tasks and priorities each morning, and as a result I complete more tasks on time and reduce mistakes.

建議: Give a clear main idea and two concise reasons with better grammar. Avoid filler words and repetitive phrases. Use linking words like “firstly” and “also” and be specific about reasons (e.g., find it time-consuming, prefer flexibility).

範例: Some people dislike lists because they find them time-consuming and restrictive. For example, they may prefer flexibility in their day or feel it takes extra time to plan, so they avoid making lists.

建議: Start with a direct answer and give one specific reason with correct phrasing. Remove fillers and repetitive phrases. Use linking words like “because” and include a brief example of convenience.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because my phone is always with me. For example, I can quickly open a notes app while I am shopping and check off items, which saves time and prevents forgotten purchases.

× Yes, I do make a list how whenever I want to do a shopping because when I have all the items that I need on my hand and put it in my list, it's easy for me to not miss anything when I goes to shopper supermarket or a market.

✓ Yes, I make a list whenever I go shopping because when I have all the items I need written down, it's easy for me not to miss anything when I go to the supermarket or the market.

Errors: unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in simple present and awkward word order ('how whenever'); incorrect article and phrase 'on my hand'; wrong verb form 'goes'; awkward noun 'shopper supermarket'. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I make a list' for habitual actions, place phrases simply ('whenever I go shopping'), use 'written down' or 'on my list', use 'go' for first person, and use 'the supermarket' or 'the market'. Grammar problem types: Present tense issue (6), Subject-verb agreement errors (27), Incorrect use of articles (22), Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× So it definitely helpful.

✓ So it is definitely helpful.

Error: missing verb 'is' after subject 'it'. Suggestion: Include the appropriate form of 'be' to make a complete clause: 'it is definitely helpful.' Grammar problem types: Sentence without a verb (23), Incorrect use of pronouns (12).

× Yes, definitely. I also did the lease for my work, uh, because it helped me to organize and become a detail oriented.

✓ Yes, definitely. I also made a list for my work because it helped me to organize and become more detail-oriented.

Errors: wrong verb 'did the lease' (probably meant 'made the list'); awkward phrase 'become a detail oriented' missing hyphen and article. Suggestion: Use 'made a list' for creating lists, use 'detail-oriented' with hyphen and add 'more' or 'a' appropriately: 'become more detail-oriented.' Grammar problem types: Past tense issue (5), Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs (13).

× So when I organize my plant well, it's also maximize my work performance in my workplace as well.

✓ So when I organize my plan well, it also maximizes my work performance at my workplace.

Errors: 'plant' should be 'plan'; missing third-person singular inflection 'maximizes'; redundant 'as well'. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'plan' and add -s to the verb for third-person singular subject 'it', and prefer 'at my workplace' for preposition. Grammar problem types: Incorrect use of pronouns (12), Third person singular issue (2), Incorrect use of prepositions (11).

× Sometime they because of their laziness or sometime, umm, people don't know how to make a list and it don't, sometimes it need them to take its spare time to think and restore what uh, review what they need to do.

✓ Sometimes it is because of laziness, or sometimes people don't know how to make a list, and sometimes it requires them to take spare time to think and review what they need to do.

Errors: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'; missing verb after 'they'; contraction 'it don't' incorrect; 'it need them' incorrect subject-verb and pronoun; awkward 'restore' and 'its spare time'. Suggestions: Use 'sometimes' for frequency, ensure each clause has a clear subject and correct verb form ('it is because', 'it requires them'), use 'take spare time' or 'set aside time', and use 'review' not 'restore'. Grammar problem types: Present tense issue (6), Third person singular issue (2), Incorrect use of pronouns (12).

× So uh, it leading them to lazy to do it.

✓ So it leads them to be too lazy to do it.

Errors: missing auxiliary inflection 'leads' (third-person singular) and incorrect structure 'to lazy'; need 'to be lazy' or 'to become lazy'. Suggestion: Use 'leads them to be' or 'makes them too lazy' to express causation clearly. Grammar problem types: Third person singular issue (2), Incorrect reflexive pronoun use (15), Sentence structure errors (26).

× Personally, I often prefer umm, making a list on my phone because my phone is always with me, it's on always on my hand, so when I need to check it, it's easy for me and convenient to search it up and check all the lists.

✓ Personally, I often prefer making a list on my phone because my phone is always with me; it's always in my hand, so when I need to check it, it's easy and convenient to find and review my lists.

Errors: redundant 'umm', word order 'it's on always on my hand', awkward 'search it up' and 'check all the lists'. Suggestions: Remove filler words, use correct word order 'it's always in my hand', use 'find and review' or 'look up' for clarity, and say 'my lists' rather than 'all the lists'. Grammar problem types: Present tense issue (6), Incorrect adverb placement (20), Incorrect use of prepositions (11)}]}