列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: まず第一に、発音や流暢さに関する練習が必要です（“race”ではなく“list”などの誤発音の修正）。次に、回答構造を整え、トピック文→理由→具体例の順で話す練習をしてください。具体的には、無駄な黙考の音（uh, I）を減らし、代わりに短いまとまったフレーズで答えること。語彙は“annoying”や“random shopping”のように正しい単語を使い、詳細（どんな“hidden gem”か、週に何回など）を1つ加えてください。

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list. I find lists a bit annoying because they limit my ability to browse casually. For example, when I shop for clothes I like to explore different stores and sometimes discover unexpected bargains or unique items.

建議: 回答を簡潔で論理的にまとめる訓練をしてください。仕事に関する回答は職業やリストの具体的な使い方（優先順位付け、期限の管理など）を含めると効果的です。不要な繰り返しや中断を避け、文法（“a researchers”→“a researcher”）を正すこと。また、リンク表現（For example, To prioritize, etc.）を使い具体例を加えてください。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for work because I juggle several tasks as a university researcher. For example, I list experiments, meetings and paper deadlines and then prioritize them so I don't forget important tasks.

建議: 抽象的な表現だけでなく、理由を明確で具体的に示す練習をしてください。例えば“lists feel compulsory”という意見の後に、どのような心理（自由が奪われる、プレッシャーを感じる等）が働くのかを説明します。話す際は一文にまとめ、繋ぎ言葉（because, so, therefore）を使って論理性を出してください。不要なフィラー（uh, I）を減らす練習も重要です。

範例: Many people dislike making lists because they feel lists are too restrictive and create pressure. For example, seeing unfinished tasks can make them anxious, so they prefer to stay flexible and decide spontaneously.

建議: 理由を明確に述べ、比較表現を使って論理的にまとめる練習をしてください。語彙の正確さ（“electric device”→“electronic device”）と文法（“what I wrote in a paper”→“what I wrote on paper”）を直しましょう。さらに具体例（どのアプリを使うか、同期や検索の利点）を加えると説得力が増します。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because electronic devices are more convenient for storing and retrieving notes. For instance, I use a notes app that syncs across my devices, so I never worry about forgetting or damaging a paper list.

× I, I don't make a race typically, uh, when go to shop.

✓ I don't make a list typically when I go shopping.

The sentence has several issues: incorrect word 'race' should be 'list', missing subject 'I' before 'go', and incorrect verb form 'shop' should be the -ing form 'shopping' after 'go'. Also word order should be natural: 'typically when I go shopping'. Improve by choosing correct vocabulary, including the subject, and using 'go' + -ing form for activities.

× Uh, the reason why I don't make shop is that, uh, it's a bit annuous for me.

✓ The reason why I don't make a list is that it's a bit annoying for me.

'Make shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. 'Annous' is a misspelling; the correct adjective is 'annoying'. Also need the article 'a' before 'list'. Use correct noun phrase and adjective forms.

× And, uh, also I, I prefer random shopping which are ready to, uh, finding a hidden gem, so I don't make a list on daily basis.

✓ Also, I prefer random shopping because I enjoy finding hidden gems, so I don't make a list on a daily basis.

Problems: subject-verb agreement 'which are ready to' is incorrect and awkward. Use 'because' to give reason and verb 'finding' should follow 'enjoy'. Add article 'a' before 'daily basis'. Improve by using clear causal connector and verb patterns: 'prefer X because I enjoy Y'.

× Sometimes I make a list for work.

✓ Sometimes I make a list for work.

This sentence is grammatically correct in present simple to describe habitual action; no change needed. Keep as is.

× I have to juggle several different type of tasks and we just reach, uh, sometimes I forget, uh, what I should do, so I make a list.

✓ I have to juggle several different types of tasks, and sometimes I forget what I should do, so I make a list.

Use plural 'types' after 'several different'. Remove extraneous 'we just reach'. Keep comma placement and simplify to natural phrasing.

× Actually, I work as a, a researchers in university.

✓ Actually, I work as a researcher at a university.

'Researchers' is plural incorrectly used; should be singular 'researcher' after 'work as a'. Use preposition 'at' and include article 'a' before 'university'.

× I recently I researchers in university have to, uh, do some other other.

✓ Recently, I have had to do some other tasks at the university.

Original repeats words and has wrong word order. Use present perfect 'have had to' for recent obligations, 'tasks' as noun, and 'at the university' as location. Remove repeated words.

× I think, uh, making a list is a a bit a compulsory and actually I feel uh, somehow complaining when I make a list and uh, a list I may list seems to make me uh, upset and uh, uh, I feel, I feel, uh, I have to do.

✓ I think making a list feels a bit compulsory, and I somehow complain when I make one; a list seems to make me upset because I feel I have to do the items.

Errors: extra articles 'a a', incorrect adjective 'compulsory' used after 'a bit' is okay but wording improved to 'feels a bit compulsory'. Repetitions removed and sentence reorganized for clarity. Use pronoun 'one' for 'a list' and explain reason clearly.

× I prefer making a list on phone because electric device is a quite convenient to uh, store and retrieve what I wrote in a paper.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because electronic devices are quite convenient for storing and retrieving what I wrote on paper.

Missing possessive 'my' before 'phone'. 'Electric device' should be 'electronic devices' (plural) and 'a quite convenient' is incorrect — use 'quite convenient'. Use 'for storing and retrieving' (gerund) and 'on paper' not 'in a paper'.

× Uh, I typically, uh, forget, uh, carrying it and also, uh, paper itself may be easily broken.

✓ I typically forget to carry it, and also paper can be easily damaged.

Use infinitive 'forget to carry' rather than 'forget carrying' for the intended meaning. 'May be easily broken' is awkward; 'can be easily damaged' is more natural. Remove filler words for clarity.