图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够自然。建议减少重复，使用更准确的时态和表达方式，例如用过去时描述过去的习惯，用现在时描述现在的情况。

範例: I used to go to the library three or four times a week when I was young. However, now I rarely visit it.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的句型和词汇，避免语法错误，并且逻辑更连贯。

範例: I usually use the computers in the library to watch YouTube videos because I don't have a computer at home. Sometimes, I also do my homework there and borrow some comic books to read at home.

建議: 时态使用不准确，表达重复。建议使用过去时描述过去的习惯，避免重复表达。

範例: Yes, I went to the library often when I was a kid because it was very convenient and close to my home.

建議: 句子结构不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使内容更连贯。

範例: I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents want them to read more books, so they take them there to borrow books to read at home.

× I would often go to the library when I was young.

✓ I often went to the library when I was young.

这里描述过去的习惯动作，应该用一般过去时，而不是情态动词would。

× In the library I would play a computer to watch a YouTube because I don't have the computer in my home.

✓ In the library I would use a computer to watch YouTube because I don't have a computer at home.

play a computer是不正确的搭配，应该用use a computer。YouTube前不需要冠词the。

× So sometimes I also will do a Internet homework into the library and I also will borrow some broke some comics to home.

✓ So sometimes I also do Internet homework in the library and I also borrow some broken comics to take home.

do homework前不加冠词a；Internet homework前不加冠词；介词into用错，应该用in；broke是形容词broken的错误形式；borrow comics to home表达不准确，应该说borrow comics to take home。

× Yes, of course I go.

✓ Yes, of course I did.

回答过去时问题时，动词也应使用过去时go的过去式did。

× that time I will usually go to the library because it's very convenient.

✓ at that time I usually went to the library because it was very convenient.

描述过去习惯动作时，应该用一般过去时，不用will。

× I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents will want their children to read more books and so will take them to the library to borrow some book to home to read it.

✓ I think Chinese kids often go to the library because their parents want their children to read more books and so take them to the library to borrow some books to read at home.

will want和will take不合适，表达习惯用一般现在时；borrow some book应为borrow some books；borrow books to home表达不准确，应该是borrow books to read at home。