图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cavabınızda daha təbii və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, 'Yep' yerinə 'Yes' demək daha rəsmi və uyğun olar. Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məntiqli edin, təkrarları aradan qaldırın və mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library in Baku, which is very beautiful and large. It has many books in English, Russian, and other languages. I feel relaxed and comfortable when I am there.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. Mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın və əlavə məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin. Məsələn, 'Nowadays' kimi sözlərdən istifadə edərək fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirin.

範例: Usually, I study my lessons or read books in English, Russian, or German. Nowadays, I am learning German, so I mainly use German books from the library.

建議: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin. Mövzunu birbaşa cavablandırın və fikirlərinizi məntiqli şəkildə əlaqələndirin. Qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və təkrarları aradan qaldırın.

範例: No, I did not go to the library as a child because I spent most of my time playing with friends and studying. I was not interested in books or libraries and did not know what a library was.

建議: Cavabınızı daha aydın və məntiqli edin. Şəxsi fikrinizi ifadə edərkən daha uyğun ifadələrdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi dəstəkləyən səbəblər verin. Məsələn, 'I think' və ya 'In my opinion' kimi ifadələrdən istifadə edin.

範例: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library because I have not read much about it. However, in my opinion, many Chinese children do visit libraries because schools in China encourage reading and learning.

× There are many books which which is the English language, Russian language or another languages.

✓ There are many books which are in English, Russian, or other languages.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'Books' is plural, so the relative clause should use 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'another languages' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns; the correct phrase is 'other languages'.

× Actually like to other people I deal with my lessons or I read some another books which are the English, Russian or German language.

✓ Actually, like other people, I deal with my lessons or read some other books which are in English, Russian, or German.

The phrase 'like to other people' is incorrect; it should be 'like other people'. Also, 'some another books' is incorrect; 'another' should not be used with plural nouns, so 'some other books' is correct. Additionally, 'which are the English, Russian or German language' should be 'which are in English, Russian, or German' to correctly express the languages of the books.

× Nowadays I learn the German language, so I only use the books in the library which was written in.

✓ Nowadays I am learning the German language, so I only use the books in the library which were written in it.

The sentence has tense inconsistency; 'I learn' should be present continuous 'I am learning' to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'which was written in' is incorrect because 'books' is plural, so 'were written in' is correct. The sentence also needs the object 'it' to complete the phrase.

× Actually no, because I when my childhood I only played with my friends, with my school friends, I only studied with my lessons or another thing.

✓ Actually no, because when I was a child, I only played with my friends, my school friends, and studied my lessons or other things.

The phrase 'I when my childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child'. Also, 'studied with my lessons or another thing' is awkward; 'studied my lessons or other things' is better. The sentence needs proper past tense forms and clearer structure.

× So I didn't interested in the books or libraries.

✓ So I wasn't interested in books or libraries.

The verb 'interested' requires the verb 'to be' in the correct tense. 'Didn't interested' is incorrect; the correct form is 'wasn't interested'. Also, 'in the books or libraries' should be 'in books or libraries' unless referring to specific ones.

× Actually I didn't know what is the library.

✓ Actually, I didn't know what a library is.

In indirect questions after past tense verbs, the word order changes to statement form. 'What is the library' is direct question order; it should be 'what a library is'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'library'.

× I can't say surely Chinese kids often go to the library because I don't read another article about Chinese kids.

✓ I can't say for sure that Chinese kids often go to the library because I haven't read any articles about Chinese kids.

'Can't say surely' is awkward; 'can't say for sure' is the correct expression. Also, 'I don't read another article' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I haven't read any articles' is appropriate to indicate experience up to now.

× But if I talk about my brain, my knowledge, I say that Chinese kids often go to the library because the Chinese library, Chinese schools are so sensible, so smart.

✓ But if I talk about my knowledge, I would say that Chinese kids often go to the library because Chinese libraries and schools are very sensible and smart.

'My brain' is an incorrect expression here; 'my knowledge' is appropriate. Also, 'the Chinese library, Chinese schools' is awkward; plural 'libraries' fits better. 'Sensible' is not commonly used to describe schools; 'smart' or 'well-organized' is better. The modal 'would say' fits better for hypothetical statements.