图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は直接的ですが、文法の誤りと不自然な表現があります。例えば、「library is so quiet」は「the library is very quiet」とするのが自然です。また、理由を述べる際に接続詞を使うとより効果的です。

範例: Yes, I often go to the library because I am currently studying English, and the library is very quiet, which helps me concentrate.

建議: 文法の誤り（"I looking up"は誤り）と不自然な表現があります。さらに、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより自然です。具体的な活動内容を詳しく述べると良いでしょう。

範例: I usually study English both alone and with my friend. Also, I look up new information related to English to improve my skills.

建議: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。例えば、「when I was child」は「when I was a child」、「I looked up. Important things」は不自然です。理由を述べる際に接続詞を使い、文をつなげると良いです。

範例: Yes, I did when I was a child. Since I didn't have a smartphone, I often went to the library to look up important information.

建議: 質問に対する答えが不明確で、文法や表現の誤りがあります。例えば、「Yes, I did」は質問に合いません。また、「active about starting」は意味が不明瞭です。もっと明確に自分の意見を述べ、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

範例: I'm not sure, but I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they are eager to learn and study.

× Yes I do, because recently I study English and library is so quiet.

✓ Yes I do, because recently I have been studying English and the library is so quiet.

The sentence uses 'study' in simple present tense, but 'recently' indicates an ongoing action, so present perfect continuous 'have been studying' is appropriate. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Yes I do, because recently I study English and library is so quiet.

✓ Yes I do, because recently I have been studying English and the library is so quiet.

The noun 'library' is a specific place, so it requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× I usually study English alone and with my friend.

✓ I usually study English alone and with my friends.

When referring to friends in general, the plural form 'friends' is more natural. 'Friend' singular implies only one friend, but usually people study with multiple friends.

× Also I looking up new information for English.

✓ Also I look up new information for English.

The verb 'looking' is incorrectly used without an auxiliary verb. The correct simple present form is 'look' to match the habitual action.

× Yes, I did when I was child.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child.

The noun 'child' requires the indefinite article 'a' when used in this context.

× I don't have a smartphone, so I went to library and I looked up. Important things.

✓ I didn't have a smartphone, so I went to the library and looked up important things.

'Library' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'didn't have' is better to match past tense context. The phrase 'looked up important things' should be one sentence without a period in between.

× I don't have a smartphone, so I went to library and I looked up. Important things.

✓ I didn't have a smartphone, so I went to the library and looked up important things.

The verb 'don't have' should be in past tense 'didn't have' to match the past context. Also, 'looked up important things' should be a continuous phrase.

× Yes, I did. I'm not sure. I think they're active about starting so they often go to the library.

✓ Yes, they do. I'm not sure. I think they're active about starting, so they often go to the library.

The answer to 'Do Chinese kids often go to the library?' should be in present tense 'Yes, they do.' instead of past tense 'Yes, I did.' Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate clauses.