图书馆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz tekrarlayıcı ve uzun. Daha kısa ve doğrudan ifadeler kullanarak cevabınızı daha etkili hale getirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha uygun kullanarak cümlenizi akıcı yapabilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I often go to the library in my free time because it is quiet and helps me concentrate better on my studies.

建議: Cevabınızda bazı tekrarlar ve dolaylı ifadeler var. Daha doğrudan ve net cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, 'umm' gibi dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının ve bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlelerinizi bağlayın.

範例: I usually study science subjects like mathematics, physics, and biology in the library, especially when I have important exams coming up.

建議: Cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve 'uh' gibi dolgu kelimeleri kullanılmış. Cümlenizi tamamlayarak ve dolgu kelimelerden kaçınarak daha doğal ve etkili cevaplar verebilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, when I was about 5 or 6 years old, I regularly went to the library with my brother while he was preparing for his exams, so I learned how to behave there early on.

建議: Cevabınız mantıklı ancak daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirilebilir. Bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayabilirsiniz.

範例: Yes, I believe many Chinese kids often go to the library because, studying at a university in China, I've noticed that students use libraries to improve their learning efficiency.

× Yes, in my free times, I pay attention to study in libraries because of the fact that they're really quiet and it's efficient to study there because I like practicing my studies in quiet places.

✓ Yes, in my free time, I pay attention to studying in libraries because they are really quiet and it is efficient to study there since I like practicing my studies in quiet places.

The phrase 'free times' is incorrect because 'time' in this context is an uncountable noun and should be singular as 'free time'. Also, 'pay attention to study' should be 'pay attention to studying' to use the correct verb form after the preposition 'to'. Additionally, 'it's efficient' is better expressed as 'it is efficient' for clarity, and 'because of the fact that' is wordy; 'because' or 'since' is preferred.

× Yes, in my free times, I pay attention to study in libraries because of the fact that they're really quiet and it's efficient to study there because I like practicing my studies in quiet places.

✓ Yes, in my free time, I pay attention to studying in libraries because they are really quiet and it is efficient to study there since I like practicing my studies in quiet places.

After the phrase 'pay attention to', the verb should be in the '-ing' form (gerund), so 'study' should be 'studying'. This is a common rule in English grammar where prepositions are followed by gerunds.

× I claim that studying more science lectures is better for me.

✓ I believe that studying more science subjects is better for me.

The verb 'claim' is less appropriate here; 'believe' fits better for expressing opinion. Also, 'studying more science lectures' is incorrect because 'lectures' are events, not subjects; 'science subjects' is more appropriate. The sentence is in present tense and should maintain correct noun usage.

× That's why in my free time, whenever I go to the library, umm, I'm trying to study mathematics, physics and biology, that's why.

✓ That's why, in my free time, whenever I go to the library, I try to study mathematics, physics, and biology.

The phrase 'I'm trying to study' suggests a temporary action, but the context implies a habitual action, so simple present 'I try' is more appropriate. Also, the repeated 'that's why' is redundant and should be removed for clarity.

× And whenever I have an important exam before one or two days, I'm studying there.

✓ And whenever I have an important exam in one or two days, I study there.

The phrase 'before one or two days' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate time until the exam. Also, 'I'm studying there' suggests a current ongoing action, but the sentence refers to habitual action, so simple present 'I study there' is correct.

× Yes, when I was 5 or 6 years old, I was uh regularly going to the library with my brother because my brother was preparing for his important exams.

✓ Yes, when I was 5 or 6 years old, I regularly went to the library with my brother because he was preparing for his important exams.

The past continuous 'was regularly going' is awkward here; simple past 'regularly went' is better for habitual past actions. Also, 'my brother was preparing' is correct, but 'my brother' can be replaced with 'he' to avoid repetition.

× That's why I know how library works and how to act in libraries since I was a.

✓ That's why I know how a library works and how to behave in libraries since I was a child.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an article before 'library'; it should be 'a library'. Also, 'how to act in libraries' is better expressed as 'how to behave in libraries'. The phrase 'since I was a' is incomplete and should be completed as 'since I was a child'.

× Yes, I'm sure that they are because I'm studying in a university in China and I've learned a lot of different techniques from Chinese students.

✓ Yes, I'm sure that they do because I'm studying at a university in China and I've learned a lot of different techniques from Chinese students.

The phrase 'they are' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'they do' to answer the question about whether Chinese kids often go to the library. Also, the preposition 'in a university' should be 'at a university' to indicate attendance.

× Yes, I'm sure that they are because I'm studying in a university in China and I've learned a lot of different techniques from Chinese students.

✓ Yes, I'm sure that they do because I'm studying at a university in China and I've learned a lot of different techniques from Chinese students.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending an institution; the correct preposition is 'at'. Also, 'they are' should be 'they do' to correctly respond to the question about frequency of going to the library.

× That's why I know that they are studying in libraries to be more efficient in their lectures.

✓ That's why I know that they study in libraries to be more efficient in their studies.

The phrase 'they are studying' suggests an action happening now, but the context is habitual, so simple present 'they study' is more appropriate. Also, 'in their lectures' is incorrect; 'in their studies' or 'with their studies' is better.